Here we are beginning our result declarations with the Park Jimin category..vohoooo!!!

As we all know our mochi is a consistent and a very hardworking soul, always striving to be the best. So, as the host and your wellwisher, I hope you all(those who didn't win) dont get disheartened, or come for the judges and their skills but learn from the reviews we provide you with. Please take this as an inspiration to write more and in a better way so that noone gets to point out mistakes in your precious works.

As for our winners~~ I know you all are excited and trust me, I won't make you wait for long. So lets not waste any time and go meet our winners♡♡

The Third Place goes to...

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Flawed Gem by Mrs_Namnam

Flawed Gem

Judge: HotChocoChipCookie

Title 5/5: Matched the story perfectly.

Cover 5/5: Eye catching, I liked it.

Description 9/10: Very good but I still think you can make it a bit more mysterious.

Grammar and punctuation 13/15: You need to work on your grammar a bit.

Writing style and vocabulary 14/15: Great! The chapters were a bit rushed though.

First impression 9/10: You had a really good start.

Plot 15/15: Loved it.

Emotions 10/10: Great!

Character development 9/10: It was a bit rushed.

Dialogue 5/5: Very good!

Overall 94/100: I believe the only thing you need to work on is your grammar otherwise everything is great! Good luck with your writing :)

Many congrats hun❤❤ keep slaying and all the best for your future projects!

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Now, The Second Place goes to......

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Aurora by Mochi_archer

Judge's name: moon-princess1

Book name: Aurora

Author: Mochi_archer

Category: Park Jimin

I. Title: 4

I like your title. It made me interested in reading the story and it's definitely unique. But not actually matches with story. But still impressive.

II. Cover: 5

I like your cover. It's aesthetic and goes with story as well. So satisfactory.

III. Description: 10

It could get attention at first sight. Your description made me interested in reading your story. Honestly, it's very amazing.

IV. Grammar and punctuation: 14

Your grammar is good. Sentence are well built. But yet, some sentences are not formed clearly. It might confuse readers. 

V. Vocabulary/writing style: 14

Your way of expressing is very good. you used sweet and easy words. You could have some unique words, it could increase reader's interest and could have been clear of character's emotion.

VI. First impression: 10

Impressive. It made me interested in reading furthermore. An amazing start.

VII. Plot: 15

Your plot was really interesting. It increased my interest in reading more and more.

VIII. Emotions: 8

Your story portrays every character's emotion perfectly. But it was not unique way as usual like other love stories. Try to get into the characters soul. Only then you can understand reader's emotion.

IX. Character development: 5

Well, your character didn't usually change it's emotion that way. It didn't hamper the reader's interest. Try to focus on character.

X. Dialogues: 5

Dialogues are perfectly fit at each event or in other words each scene.

Total: 95

My only suggestion for you is Just don't use short forms in stories. It could decrease reader's interest. And add some emotions in it.

Congratulations sweeetieee❤❤❤ Keep slaying and all the best for your future🥰

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Now...the ultimate winner, our talented author, our First Place Winner is......

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imma bring some balloons

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Okay! The First Place goes to

Ethereal by Juliander2

Ethereal

Judge: HotChocoChipCookie

Title 4/5: It’s not a unique name but as long as it suits the story it’s great!

Cover 3/5 : For a great book like yours the cover was way too simple, I suggest you change it if you want.

Description 10/10 : It was really good! Not too much or too little.

Grammar and punctuation 15/15 : I didn’t mark any grammar nor punctuation mistakes, it was perfect!

Writing style and vocabulary 15/15 : All I can say is that it was perfect, I truly loved the way you wrote and described the incidents.

First impression 10/10 : Loved it! The first chapter was nothing close to boring, it was great.

Plot 15/15 : Great! It wasn’t slow nor was it rushed, everything happened in time and I believe it wasn’t something cliche, it was new to me.

Emotions 10/10 : You described them so well that it really made me feel the same way as the characters were feeling.

Character development 10/10 : Perfect as well.

Dialogues 5/5 : Everything was clear and it all made sense.

Overall 97/100: There’s nothing I can tell you to improve in your book because it’s great! You did a great job and I wish you good luck for your other books as well :))

CONGRATULATIONS UNNIEE!!! You deservee it and I wish you all the best for your future projectss UwU❤❤❤

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Participants of the previous categories please be patient with us, we will publish all the results as soon as possible. We have started with this category but we can publish any category for the next time so please wait.

Big hugs and kisses for our hardworking judges! They all worked hard to judge your books and deserve our appreciation.
So, a big thank you to-

HotChocoChipCookie
moon-princess1
GucciTaeWinterBear
Dragon_Kitara

Thank you so much dear judgess❤

Also, participants of this category and those who want their reviews, please pm any one of the hosts and we will send you your results.

Again, dont be sad and try to improve for your readers as much as you can.

Love you all and we will meet you with the other category results soon! Stay safe and stay tuned!