Here we are back with the winners of our ships category~

Before announcing the results, lets just take a moment and tell ourselves that shipping two idols isn't wrong, as long as you dont rub that in other people's face (especially baby armys) and go on to hate those  clueless idols for not ending up together!!
I know most of you aren't like that, so take this as a small talk and a request. Our boys work extra hard for us and we definitely don't want them to be weirded out just because we demand them to be together with their group members.

We all love them equally so I know none is here to hate and thus, on that note, lets go and meet our winners♡♡

The Third Place goes to......

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5 Centimeters Per Second by Eulissah

Judge: Loraslk
5 Centimeters Per Second
Ships

Book title: 5 - The title relates completely to what the book is about. The underlying motif of petals and the way it relates to the story and characters. The title is also unique.

Cover: 5 - The Cover is attractive and show’s off the main protagonists and cherry bottle petals which is what the book is about. So the cover is conveyed well.

Description 9 - Description tells you about the fact they are childhood sweethearts as well as the fact they drift away like petals from a cherry blossom tree and also link to the story. It is interesting, however is a bit confusing to read.

Grammar & Punctuation 15 - I found no errors with your Grammar and Punctuation.

Writing Style & Vocabulary 14 - Your writing style is different, however I liked it because it was poem-like in a way. At some points I found it confusing to understand who was talking however that’s a minor detail as most of it was pretty clear. You also didn’t have any too long paragraphs.

First Impression 9 - At the start I was slightly confused with the book however it started to intrigue me as I wanted to know what would happen between Yoongi and Jimin. So I didn’t want to leave reading it. I wanted to know what was going to happen next. However my first impressions was it was slightly flat and lacked some excitement to get me super hooked on the book.

Plot 15 - Like cherry blossom petals, both Yoongi and Jimin drifted apart except Jimin held love still in his chest for Yoongi but at the end Yoongi had moved on allowing Jimin to finally move on. It is a unique, uncommon plot which I thoroughly enjoyed. There also were cliffhangers of Taehyung liking Jimin and Jimin being with Jungkook.
Or Jimin getting stuck in a train going to see Yoongi etc.

Emotions 7 - I felt eager to know what was going to happen next between Yoongi and Jimin, I felt Jimin’s love and wanting for Yoongi and felt Taehyung’s heart suffering from not being seen by Jimin. However I felt no deeper emotional connection from the style of writing.

Character Development 10 - Jimin is in a loop of having his heart to Yoongi however by the end Jimin overcomes this and realizes that where they have been living has separated them and that he needs to move on. Yoongi is hopeful to be with Jimin at the start but realizes before Jimin that he’s done waiting and needs to move on. And Taehyung realizes that Jimin isn’t after him so seeks to move on and also decide what his future holds. And Jungkook was a measure of Jimin knowing that he doesn’t hold his heart with Jungkook, a part of Jimin’s character development.

Dialogue 4 - Cute dialogue that would have been said if someone was in the same situation, however at times it was hard to tell who was speaking.

Total: 93/100

Suggestions: I really enjoyed reading your book, 5 Centimeters Per Second. There were barely any flaws minus I found at some points it was confusing with who was speaking. And I found there was a lack of emotions. So to improve I would just suggest you reread through the book checking the dialogue makes sense and is clear who is speaking and try to add in more emotional connection for the reader to pick up on while reading the novel. Also I would suggest you try to make your book blurb sound more captivating and magical so more people want to read it as it’s slightly lacking. But overall I really enjoyed your book, there wasn’t much that I thought needed to be worked on. So Keep up the great work :) -

Congratulations hun! Keep writing and all the best for your future works❤❤

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The Second Place goes to.....

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Coffee by Mrs_Namnam

Book Title - 5
☆ It wasnt unique but does go with story as it is mentioned in the end as the beginning of the characters relationship. I liked that.
 
2. Cover - 5
 
☆ It was creative but I can't really say if it's attractive or not. It's like a kind of cover that matches with people's taste. But it still looked good.
 
3.  Description - 10
☆ It was written well but so confusing. Like people would read it to know what is happening in the description. Other than that the person won't get any point about the book.
 
4. Grammar and Punctuation - 15
☆  Grammar and punctuation were all right.
 
5. Writing Style and vocabulary - 15
☆ Writing styles were awesome! It was written carefully and nicely. The paras were all good.
 
6. First impression - 10
☆ It was impressive, was a nice beginning. I did not felt like leaving it. It was very interesting.
 
7. Plot - 15
☆ Just a normal plot but interesting. Proceeding of the story is all good.
 
8.  Emotions - 10
☆ Of course it was so detailed and was written in the best the way to understand and is so relatable. I felt the character.
 
9. Character Development - 10
☆ It was good. I could visualizer them as in the description.
 
10. Dialogues - 5
☆ Yes, there are good and that's all the characters would say af the moment. This was also kinda relatable.
 
Total Mark's: 100
 
Some suggested improvement points if any: I think everything was alright, but if I should it is the cover. As I said it is a kind of cover that is fitted with different types of people's taste. But in my personal opinion the cover being a little classic would be better fit to the plot.

Your(Judge's) username: IamFromMars7
Book Title - Coffee
Participants Username- Mrs_Namnam
Category - Ships
Title - 5/5
Cover - 4/5
Description- 7/10
Grammar and Punctuation- 15/15
Writing Style and vocabulary- 15/15
First Impression- 9/10
Plot - 14/15
Emotions- 10/10
Character Development- 10/10
Dialogues- 5/5
 
Total: 94/100

Congratulations hun~ Keep writing and all the best for your works❤❤

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And now, The First Place goes to....

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The Fault In Their Moon by RS_Elane

Book Title - 5
☆ It was unique and I guess it was inspire by the "The Fault In Their Stars". It was great.

2. Cover - 5
☆ It was great cover and it just matches perfectly with plot. Very attractive but the "By xxxx A tae kook ff" font wasn't so matching to the picture. It can be better.

3.  Description - 10
☆ It was interesting. It kinda attract readers withe suspense in it and was greatly written. I did felt like reading the book.

4. Grammar and Punctuation - 15
☆ I think I barely found any Grammatical or punctuational error. It was error free.

5. Writing Style and vocabulary - 15
☆ I just have to praise your writing🛐. It was gorgeous!! Careful, detailed and beautifully written! The paras where just so fine and everything was neat and well written. The writing style matches well with the story. The dialogues were all good.

6. First impression - 10
☆ I felt like I was in a fantasy world with the Alpha in front of the moon. It was written so magically and beautifully. It just pulls you further into the book.

7. Plot - 15
☆  I usually don't read alpha or hybrid thingies but Im just soo curious about the further chapters. Plot is just so good, with plot twists, surprises and humour.

8.  Emotions - 10
☆ Absolutely! The emotions were described so well, the surroundings, the feelings, everything.

9. Character Development - 10
☆ It was nice! The developments were accurate. Every characters are developed as themselves. I can  visualize them as the description

10. Dialogues - 5
☆ Of course, everything was just fine and clear. They does makes sense. It's clear who's speaking.

Total Mark's: 100

Some suggested improvement points if any: I only think u should improve the font below the picture and everything is fine.

Your(Judge's) username: IamFromMars7
Book Title - The Fault In Their Moon
Participants Username- RS_Elane
Category - Ships
Title - 5/5
Cover - 3/5
Description- 9/10
Grammar and Punctuation- 15/15
Writing Style and vocabulary- 15/15
First Impression- 10/10
Plot - 14/15
Emotions- 10/10
Character Development- 10/10
Dialogues- 5/5

Total: 96/100

Many congrats hun!! Keep writing and all the best for all your works❤❤

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Participants who want their reviews, please pm one of the hosts for the same.

Again, dont be sad or angry for not winning and focus on improving your works as much as you can.

We will see you all with the next category winners soon, till then, stay safe and happy.