𖤐 OT7 Winners 𖤐
We are back with the results of our OT7 category~~
Yass! BTS are angels who are the best together. Incomplete without a single member and thus, we should love all of them together.
Though having a bias and wreckers isnt that bad as long as you totally ignore the other members. All of them deserve our love and support so lets be with them forever and ever armies♡♡
Lets go and meet our winners now...
The Third Place goes to.....
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Nightmare- A World Ruled by Vampires by Justin_Seagull_31
Book:nightmare a world rule by vampire
Judge: Q1js7ydb
Category:ot7
Participant username: Justin_Seagull_31
Title:5/5
Cover:5/5
Description:4/10
Grammer and Punctuation:14/15
Writing Style and Vocabulary:15/15
First Impression:9/10
Plot:15/15
Emotions:8/10
Character Development:10/10
Dialogues:4/5
Total:89/100
Improvements
◇making more dialogs written in different font I mean bold underline.
◇ur story plot is good but there is a lack of good description. I have got this story many time in suggestions but I never readed cuz it seems boring because of description.
Congratulations hun! Keep writing and all the best for your works❤
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The Second Place goes to....
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The Mysteries To Uncover by starrynightgirl63
Judge’s username: Mochi-Nation
Book title: The Mysteries To Uncover // BTS Mafia Stepbrothers FF
Participant’s username: starrynightgirl63
Category: OT7 Category
Title: 4/5
I really liked the title it’s something I never come across before. The fonts used were pretty and suitable. But I would love if the words can be clearer. I can notice there are some small Korean words there but it isn’t noticeable. Would advise the writer to adjust it.
Cover: 5/5
The cover was absolutely beautiful! It’s really relatable to the story and it give off the story vibes which I rarely get!
Description: 9/10
I really love the description as well! It made me full of curiosity and made me eager to read the story. But I would advise the writer to not give out a lot of clues in the description. Because the readers can easily guess what is the story about.
Grammar & punctuation: 14/15
The grammar used were average and pretty good. There are a few punctuation mistake but it can be fixed.
Writing style & vocabulary: 13.5/15
The paragraphs though are kinda long for me. I would prefer if the writer would trim a little of each chapter. But the dialogues were really well written! I can easily understand which character was speaking! Good job!
First impression: 9/10
The first impression I got was I was kinda eager to read the story because of the cover. But while reading the description I thought I can already predict the story.
Plot: 14/15
I really liked the plot it was a very interesting one. The storyline was great as well! But I would prefer if the writer had add cliffhangers at the end of each chapter so it would make the readers full of curiosity.
Emotions: 8.5/10
The emotions were well described but I wasn’t feeling very emotional throughout the story. At some points I can see myself as part of the character.
Character development: 10/10
The characters all were well developed! And the readers could catch up with the development.
Dialogues: 5/5
The dialogues was written really good! And it was clear which character was speaking on the moment! There was no confusing on which characters were speaking.
Total mark: 92/100
Congratulations hun!!! Keep writing and all the best for your works❤❤
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The First Place goes to....
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Phasing For Blood! StridentTranquilizer
Book:PHASING FOR BLOOD
Judge: Q1js7ydb
Category:OT7
Participant Username: StridentTranquilizer
Title:4/5
Cover:5/5
Description:10/10
Grammer and Punctuation:13/15
Writing Style and Vocabulary:13/15
First Impression:10/10
Plot:15/15
Emotions:9/10
Character Development:10/10
Dialogues:5/5
Total:94/100
Improvements~~~
♤Try adding bold italic etc etc
♤Title can be more interesting as it's VAMPIRES AND WEREWOLVES dealing book u know what I mean
♤go Smooth for grammar
Many congrats hun!! Keep writing and all the best for your works❤❤
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Participants who want their reviews, please pm any one of the hosts for the same.
A shoutout to our judges who worked hard for the reviews♡♡
This was the last category, we will be back with the host's fav category soon.
Till then stay safe and take care~
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