𖤐 Kim Seokjin Winners 𖤐

P.S. We sincerely apologize to all of you for the inconvenience caused due to the messed up reviews and also for the delay. We tried our best to resolve this as soon as we could and also KimLunaRJ2 thank you for bringing the mistake in our notice at an urgent basis.
Our deepest apologies people..

Helloo participants!! We are back with the Kim Seokjin results~

Our WWH is one of the most confident people I have ever seen, his personality is just so beautiful and his consistent hardwork over the years has made him into a very good dancer and an excellent vocalist. He is the perfect balance of looks, voice and dance and a perfect balance is needed to attract people towards something. Be it yourself or your precious works.

So, lets take inspiration from our Jinniee and strive to make our works better, so that our readers get a perfect package of everything while reading our book.

On that note, lets go and greet our winners and shower them with congratulatory messages~~

The Third Place goes to.....

Love in Parallel World by bts17forever

Judge: namjejus_is_watchin
Love in parallel world
Bts17forever

Title 5
Cover 3
Description 9
First impression 10
Plot 15
Characters 9
Dialogue 4
Grammar 15
Writing style and Vocabulary 11.5
Emotions 8.5
Total 90

The title is attractive but the cover can be better if given attention too , the author should understand that graphics are important for attracting traffic
The description was quite well written put an open ended questions could make it better
I found some typos so I suggest the author to read the chapter throrougly before posting
I liked the plots and it's well explained
I found that the author also conveyed emotions so they gain points here


Congratulations hun!! Keep slaying and all the best for your future works❤

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The Second Place goes to.....

Solo Performance by KimLunaRJ2

Judge Username: Mythics Writer
Book title: Solo Performance
Participants Username: KimLunaRJ2
Category: Kim Seokjin
Title:5/5
I like this title it leads the reader to know what the start is about. 

Cover:5/5
The Cover is really easy to read and nothing is hidden in the background.

Description:8/10
The description gives some idea of what is going on in the story and also leaves the reader wondering what happens, but I feel like there could be a bit more.

Grammar and Punctuation:15/15
There were hardly if any Grammar mistakes or Punctuation errors. It is clear that the author took the time to edit and polish this story.

Writing Style and Vocabulary:14/15
The writing style and word choices made the story flow really easily and the Vocabulary at times was simple and everything but it was still really good and easy to read, it could be a bit more descriptive at times maybe and not so simple but either way, it is still really good and easy to follow.

First Impression:10/10
This story is really good and not like every other Fanfic that you come across. This brings to light real issues that could occur as well as captures the relationship between BTS really well.
Plot:15/15

It is not a normal Fanfic, but it is an amazing short easy to follow one that flows and captures the reader’s attention. It is hard to stop reading till you get to the end.

Emotions:9/10
In the beginning, there aren’t as many emotions felt but once towards the end emotions become overwhelming and you may even cry while reading. It is beautifully well written.

Character Development:10/10
The character development occurs gradually and not all at once it happens how normal people would change it doesn’t just happen in a paragraph it is natural.

Dialogues:4/5
The Dialogues were easy to follow at times, but some were broken into paragraphs which makes sense but sometimes hard to see if it is still dialogue or story.

Total:95/100

Suggested Improvements: I don’t have much suggestion on what to improve the story is really good, its a shame it is so short but you can’t have too much of a good thing. It captures Jin really well and his relationship with each band member.

Congratulations sweeetie! All the best for your future works❤❤❤

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Now, our First Place Winner is...



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DNA by AMELIE1318

Judge: namjejus_is_watchin
DNA
AMELIE1318

Title 5
Cover 5
Description 10
First impression 10
Plot 15
Characters 10
Dialogue 5
Grammar 14
Writing Style and Vocabulary 14
Emotions 9
Total 97

The title description and cover were very beautiful and detailed so Author gains a lot in frist impression also the plots and character introduction was well written so author did a great job.

Many congrats hun!! You did veryy well..keep writing and all the best for your future works❤❤

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