The KNJ results are here!! Vohooo, I am excited~~

Our leader has a lot of contribution in the making of this iconic group. He has been sailing the ship called BTS while being the perfect captain all this while and is one of the most mature human beings I have ever seen. This man is a true leader, shaping BTS like a newborn child and leading them to where they are today.

We have a lot to learn from our leader as authors on how to shape and improve our works. So, lets go and meet the winners and promise ourselves, that we will keep trying to achieve our goals.

So the Third Place goes to......

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Eye Candy by Jellycuddles19_

User name: vanteamos
Book title: Eye candy
Participant's username: Jellycuddles19_
Kim Namjoon

Title: 3.5/5
The title doesn't really relate to the story line.

Cover: 4.5/5
I feel like the cover could have been graphically better. It does relate to the storyline but the main characters appear smeared.

Description: 8.5/10
It did catch my attention and was well put but was lengthier so people might not really comprehend it that well. (Might get bored midway)

Grammar and Punctuation:13/15
Very few grammatical errors, but there are punctuational mistakes so needs work on that.

Writing style and vocabulary: 13.5/15
Sentence structure can be better. It doesn't have to be as confusing as it is build right now. Good usage of words and language for poetic purposes.

First impression: 8.5/10
As said earlier, I liked the description and how the story took place intertwining the past and the present incidents. But there's always room for improvement!

Plot: 11/15
The thing is, similar plots are found all over Wattpad. I just wished it had a dash of different storyline or at least had a different way of conveyance. The plot was quite predictable, sadly

Emotions: 9/10
Perfectly conveyed. I loved this part alot.

Character development: 7.5/10
Jane could have been a bit more stronger than she seemed to look and Namjoon's regret came out of nowhere.

Dialogues: 4/5
Overall good. The structure could have been easier.

Total: 83/100

Improvement points: I loved the book overall. I feel like the plot being similar, there was a new spark lacking but the author did a good job in it.

Congratulations hun! Keep writing and all the best for your works❤❤

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The Second Place goes to...

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My Reflection by MeherJin

Your Username: MythicsWriter

Book title: My Reflection

Participants Username: MeherJin

Category: Kim Namjoon Fanfic

Title:5/5

I feel the title is very unique and not very common and peeks interest for the reader

Cover:4/5

The cover looks really good and most of the text is easy to read. The colors are very eye-catching, the only font hard to read is the quote on the bottom

Description:9/10

The first phrase of the description makes it seem like it's going to be a whole different story than it is but it does so in a way to make you read more of the description to where it actually tells what the story is about and it was written pretty well.

Grammar and Punctuation:15/15

Perfect grammar and punctuation to my eye, everything is very sophisticated and it's easy to tell that the author took time to write everything detailedly and not in a rush.

Writing Style and Vocabulary:14/15

The writing style and vocabulary are that of someone who reads a lot of classic literature, it's very sophisticated and uses uncommon advanced words.

First Impression:7/10

So my first impression was one of uncertainty because the word choice was one that I am not common with unless it was something school-related. I also had a hard time getting used to the format of the writing in general. I don't read many script-style fanfics or writing in general unless it is for an English class.

Plot:14/15

The plot is not very common and is very refreshing. It also doesn't get rush but sometimes feels like being dragged out.

Emotions:9/10

There are a lot of scenes filled with emotions, they create some feelings for the reader to feel and understand but sometimes it seems very unrealistic.

Character Development:9/10

There is a lot of character development over time that occurs, A lot of it is guessable though of what is going to happen.

Dialogues:3/5

There is a lot of dialogue in the story and in the first couple of chapters you only know who one of the characters is and it makes it kind of hard to understand what is happening, as well it is in script format which takes a few chapters to get used to.

Total:89/100

Suggested Improvements:

I think some phrases and sentences that are written needs to be simplified because of the complexity of words used that are uncommon to the casual reader. Also rewording scenes that occur and emotions felt by the characters would help flow some scenes better.

Congratulations sweets!! Keep writing and all the best for your future works❤

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And now,

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The first Place goes to....

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Midnight Kiss by persona_13

1. Book Title - 5
☆ It did really match with the plot. Wasn't so unique but was still a great title. Fonts used were nice ones.

2. Cover - 5

☆ It's really good and creative. Does really go with the story line as "a baseball" character.

3. Description - 10
☆ It's was well written but was kinda revealing. It almost said what is happening in the book. But is interesting.

4. Grammar and Punctuation - 15
☆ There was only a VERY less amount of mistakes. It was great and carefully written. There wasn't punctuation errors.

5. Writing Style and vocabulary - 15
☆ Writing styles is all very good. The paras were the sizes they had to be. Dialogues are written properly. Everything is good here. Are the paras too big or too small? Are the dialogues written properly? Do you understand what the dialogue mean ir who is speaking?

6. First impression - 10
☆ First impression was like not bad. Because almost everything was being spilled in the first few paras. Al lot of details are said so quickly. But going further it was good.

7. Plot - 15
☆ Plot is a really nice one. But it was common like the one nightstands or first kisses coincidently meeting again and stuff. Can be a lot more better and unique one. Twists were there.

8. Emotions - 10
☆ Emotions were very effective as I felt butterflies when the MCs interacted. A great way of admiration, nervousness, happiness everything was greatly written. I did felt like the character of the story.

9. Character Development - 10
☆ Yeah, the development was great. The wya they develop is awesome. I can visualize them as the description.

10. Dialogues - 5
☆ Dialogues are good. It does makes sense. Was all perfect.

Total Mark's: 100

Some suggested improvement points if any: I would say that, you have long way to this book so you don't have to say every single details at once. We have time so tell them by creating opportunities for each things.
Your(Judge's) username: IamFromMars7
Book Title - Midnight Kiss
Participants Username- persona_13
Category - Kim Namjoon
Title - 5/5
Cover - 5/5
Description- 8/10
Grammar and Punctuation- 14/15
Writing Style and vocabulary- 14/15
First Impression- 8/10
Plot - 14/15
Emotions- 10/10
Character Development- 10/10
Dialogues- 5/5

Total: 93/100

Manyy congrats sweets~~ Keep up the excellent work and all the best for your works❤❤❤

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All the participants who want their reviews, please pm one of the hosts for the same.

I hope you dont take these results in a negative way and I must say, we had to intervene in this category to give justice to the deserving books.

As for the judges, thanks for your time once again.
IamFromMars7
vanteamos
MythicsWriter

Thanks a lot for your cooperation people❤❤❤

This is all for this category...see u in the next one~~