The results for our golden maknae are finally here~~

Jeon Jungkook is a man who is good at everything. Archery, dance, games, singing and what not. But all of this takes a lot lot practice and hardwork. He has gone through so many things. Has taken the most mature decisions in a very young age and today he is one of the most successful idols.

He is a man I adore and a human I want to be like. Lets just respect this man and give him all the love and support he deserves forever and ever.

On that note, my dear participants, lets go and meet our winners!!

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Reappear by sookwangtae

Judge: seekerbangtan
Reappear by sookwangtae

» Title - 4/5

Would have been the best if used a good and easy to be understood synonym.

» Cover - 3/5

The cover however felt a bit 'off' the title. Like if this cover would have been used for a vampire's novel, then it might have been a good choice but not for this one according to me.

» Description - 9/10

Just try throwing a bit more light on making it look more aesthetic with words and a shadow of plot that could catch their curiosity upto level 100.

» Grammar and punctuation - 14/15

There were just a few grammatical errors that I found. Punctuation and everything was fine.

» Writing style and vocabulary - 15/15

No reviews needed, I guess?

» First impression - 9/10

Okay so just this mark got reduced here because I already knew what was going to happen in the first half of the first chapter. However the story is good to give a go to be honest.

» Plot - 12/15

Okay, so coming here, there were a few things that I thought must be pointed out. The part where Y/N's life was being descirbed, won't lie it didn't seem like that was the description about Y/N at all because just above that para, it was about her classmates and so her life's story seemed as if it was also a story of any of her classmate. Second was when they kissed, I really found it confusing for a moment whether they really kissed or was she hallucinating because of the para that was just after when Jungkook was gone leaving Y/N alone.

Otherwise the plot seems common till where he meets her boyfriend and all but I'm so so sure that after when they will get married, it'd be amazing because of the description you've given.

» Emotions - 9/10

Addition of some more deep feelings would have that spark back into the story where people could say that- "Oh damn".

» Character development - 10/10

Again, no reviews needed.

» Dialogues - 5/5

Here as well. They were written well and was made precise who said what.

Total : 90/100

Just light it up like dynamite a little quick before picky readers go as everything about writing is how you are able to capture a picky reader's interest.

Congratulations love!! Keep writing and all the best for all your works❤❤

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Psychotic Love by MaknaeVickookie

Psychotic love by MaknaeVickookie
Judge: seekerbangtan

Title: 5/5 

No reviews needed, right? 

» Cover - 4/5 

It is right now good as well but could be even more delighted if the theme matches with the title a little more. 

» Description - 10/10 

Just amazing. Starting with the vocab and ending with the description was so nice and captivating. 

» Grammar and punctuation - 14/15 

There were hardly countable grammatical errors but in punctuation, use of ( ' ) was there rather than ( " ) in the dialogues which made it hard to look at where the dialogue is starting or ending. 

» Writing style and vocabulary - 14/15 

Writing style, no doubt, is so good however in vocabulary, at some places there the use of even more good classy synonyms would make it look nicer. Like at one place, "phoned" was used whereas a simple "ring" or "call" would have sounded even better if used. Also, try keeping the chapters under 2000 as in my all reviews, I've everywhere used the term "picky readers" and your main target to be a good writer must be capturing a picky reader's interest which matters a lot to those who are newbies to the reading and writing world. And some have just their track of reading because after a time they get bored and skip. So to prevent that thing, a good length and a good alluring vocab is enough. 

» First impression - 10/10 

How you've started the book by describing the weather was so nice and smooth for a good start. 

» Plot - 14/15 

It's really good till where I've read. How the author has managed to keep the plotline in track whilst keeping it equivalent to the title was commendable. However I wanted Y/N to comfort Jimin when she knew he's breaking down in the first place instead of running away from there. 

» Emotions - 10/10 

Well descirbed. 

» Character development - 10/10 

I loved Jungkook's character sketch. 

» Dialogues - 5/5 

All set here. 

Total - 96/100 

The only thing if I'm asked to point out if to keep the chapters lenght in track as well. Like the first chapter was extremely lengthy and then short, then short. So have a precise amount of word count for every chapter. Like if you want them big, then from 1500 to 2000 approx. Don't let them be like a wave.

Congratulations hun!! Keep writing and all the best for your works ❤❤

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The Girl of my Dreams: Elegia by KimGits

Judge’s username: Mochi-Nation
Book title: The Girls of My Dreams: Elegia
Participant’s username: KimGits
Category: Jeon Jungguk
Book tittle- 4/5
The tittle name is unique and it would have been better if the author made it a bit more shorter.
Cover- 5/5
I LOVE the cover so much it looks really very pretty and it attracted me the most out of all the books.
Description- 9/10
The description made me feel like reading the book and it really made me get interested in this book but would have been better if it was not too long because people always depend on reading short for description.
Grammar and Punctuation- 15/15
So far the grammar and punctuations were perfect!
Writing style and vocabulary- 15/15
The writing style is so good and I can get to understand which character is speaking the dialogue.
First impression- 10/10
This book really attracted me when I first looked at it but I was kinda feeling bad coz it had many chapters. But still I was curious to know wat is it about in this story!
Plots- 15/15
The plots are chef kiss it’s really very interesting...and it has great cliffhangers!
Emotions- 9/10
The romancing part kinda made me feel like butterflies in my stomach and I liked that...and other than that it was normal reaction from me.
 
Character Development- 10/10
All the characters are being developed equally and it’s pretty good!
Dialogues- 5/5
The dialogues are perfect and it made sense and its clear who is speaking that dialogue.

Total: 97/100

Congratulations hun!! Keep writing and all the best for all your works❤❤❤

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A big thanks to all the judges who judged in this category♡

Thats it for this category, we will be back with our OT7 results soon.