𖤐 Oneshots/ Short Stories Winners 𖤐
Heyaa participants! We are back with the results of our oneshots/ short stories category!!!
I personally think that the well written oneshots/short stories are a super sweet treat for the readers as they don't have to put in much of their time in reading and they get the ultimate satisfaction after completing one.
I really love reading oneshots or short stories myself so I am really excited for this category's results. So without further delay, lets go and meet our winners~~
The Third Place goes to.....
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After Life by Mochi_archer
Title of the book: After Life | MYG
Judge: Anushkieeee
Author: Mochi_archer
1) Title ( 5/5): It's perfect for the story.
2) Cover ( 3/5): It's okay, but it looks dull. I would suggest something more alluring. It does match with the story though.
3) Description ( 10/10): It is really good. It doesn't give out very much and is of the perfect length.
4) First impression ( 9/10): The first impression was good. I really liked how it started.
5) Plot ( 9/10): The plot was really different. Not what we usually come across. It was well explained and well-written.
6) Character development ( 9/10): I liked how you have explained that how his thoughts on life change and how he overcomes that along with his soulmate. His emotions and feelings were described well. It just felt like it was a little rushed.
7) Dialogues ( 9/10): They were neat and understandable. There are not many dialogues in the book though.
8) Grammar ( 9.5/10): These can be easily corrected if you go through the story once. Nothing major.
Total: 63.5/70
Suggestions: I liked reading it. It was something different from the usual books one can find here. If the only thing that I can suggest is doing a few changes to the cover.
Congratulations sweets!! Keep writing and all the best for all your works❤❤
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The Second Place goes to....
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Glamping Gone Wrong by Mrs_Namnam
Title of the book: Glamping Gone Wrong || BTS
Judge: Anushkieeee
Author: Mrs_Namnam
1) Title ( 5/5): Perfect title! No going back for this.
2) Cover ( 5/5): I am so much in love with the cover. It couldn't have been more perfect. I love how it matches the plot of the book.
3) Description ( 9/10): I feel that you can include a bit more here. Like, give a little glimpse about the story instead of just adding the dialogues.
4) First impression ( 10/10): From only the look of this book, I knew I would love it. There are very few books that you start to read and already know that you are gonna love it.
5) Plot ( 10/10): There was not much going on with the plot, but at the same time, so much going on. It was different and I would be lying if I say that I didn't laugh, because I surely did.
6) Character development ( 9/10): The chapters were quite short so there was not a very detailed description of every character. But a typical Bangtan book. Chaotic and funny.
7) Dialogues ( 10/10): Well-written and neat. Not much to change here.
8) Grammar ( 9.5/10): You only need to check it a little bit. It's almost perfect (just like the plot of this book.)
Total: 67.5/70
Suggestions: Not many suggestions, just the things I have mentioned above. I loved this book. Short and funny.
Congratulations hun!! Keep writing and all the best for your works❤❤
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Now, the First Place goes to...
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I'm Fine by MochiSaysLachimolala
Title of the book: I'm Fine
Author: MochiSaysLachimolala
1) Title (5 /5): There couldn't have been a better title for this story! It doesn't give out much and makes the reader curious about the book.
2) Cover ( 5/5): The cover goes well with the plot of the story. It describes the book and suits the aura of the book very well.
3) Description ( 9/10): I like how you describe the feelings and don't just write the quotes as most people do. The only thing is that it could've been a bit longer, although it's good as it is too.
4) First impression ( 10/10): It leaves a good impression on the reader for sure. The reader will want to know more about it, about what happens and how Jungkook changes.
5) Plot ( 10/10): I love the plot. It's almost perfect. You have included so many things and have described them so well. It is not fast-paced and is well written.
6) Character development ( 10/10): The story describes Jungkook's bottled up emotions and how he overcomes that. It is well written and readers can feel the emotions you described.
7) Dialogues ( 10/10): They were neat, understandable, and well written.
8) Grammar ( 10/10): There were no major mistakes in Grammar.
Total: 69/70
Suggestions: Not much to say, lol. I loved reading this book. A neatly written and well-explained story.
Congratulations sweeets!! You deserve it! Keep writing and all the best for all your future works❤❤❤
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Participants who want their reviews, please pm one of the hosts for the same.
Again, A shoutout to our judges for this category,
For helping us processing these results and also for their time on the reviews.
Thanks a lot to you❤
That's it for this category and I know participants of JJK and KTH categories might be getting impatient now but please understand that those categories need our special attentions as hosts and so it will take a bit more time.
Don't worry we will try to be as fast as possible, till then stay safe and see you all in the next one♡
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