The last chapter, chapter 8, has a big mistake, I know. I don't know how to fix it so if you guys know how please comment it, that would be so helpful! Y'all haven't been commenting anything about this story and I really wanna know what y'all think about it.

My other story, Garroth's Sister, has a total of like 10 chapters or something like that. I have wrote other short stories in the past but my main 2 stories are this one and Garroth's Sister. I have had time to make another chapter for it but also wanna keep writing this one, its actually hard writing 2 completely different stories at once, but I would really like it if y'all comment and vote for both of my stories. Thx and cya guys later! 😃