Thank you all for participating in our first prompt contest! We hope you enjoyed writing the prompt response as much as we enjoyed reading them. The following are the results with the winner at the very bottom. We hope you continue to write in our prompt contest as the weeks go on! The points gained by everyone will be reflected in the Phoenicia's Points Shop where you can begin redeeming prizes if you'd like or you can bank the points until you drop out or the overall competition ends.

Thank you so much for judging, miss_cafephile.

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Title : Dear Me

Author's username : Catra_MeowMeow

Title : 4/5
Plot : 8/10
Originality : 4.5/5
Characters : 8.2/10
Grammar : 8.3/10
Overall enjoyment : 4.5/5

Total : 37.5/45

Review :

Even though I found a few unnecessary capitalisations in your work, you still managed to deliver your messages effectively. I am sure that your younger self would be immensely proud of you if she had the opportunity to read your meaningful letter. Your voice is also golden. It's pretty good and doesn't sound awkward. It's like you are advising me with those tips and messages about my worth. They're also relatable as in I could relate with my personal life. No matter what happens, you have done your best, and I am proud of you. Well done! 

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Title : A Letter to My Beloved

Author's username : sassy-weirdo

Title : 4/5
Plot : 8/10
Originality : 4.5/5
Characters : 8.5/10
Grammar : 8/10
Overall enjoyment : 4.5/5

Total : 37.5/45

Review :

The way you have started yours is amusing. I am deeply grateful for that. Your advice to your younger self is also something that we all should appreciate. They speak no lies at all. Besides that, I could see you throughout your work. The amount of effort that you have put into writing is the substance that will release satisfaction for yourself. I bet that you felt better after writing something special for your younger self. Overall, you have done a pretty good job. Well done! 

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Title : Dear Past You

Author's username : papersxpen

Title : 4/5
Plot : 8.7/10
Originality : 4.5/5
Characters : 8.5/10
Grammar : 7.8/10
Overall enjoyment : 4.5/5

Total : 38/45

Review :

Your bluntness in the prompt writing is something that I salute. You don't really use beautiful descriptions, dictions, advanced words or anything that is related with those that I have mentioned. However, I still could feel the emotions within you while preparing it. It also has a personal touch that everyone can relate to, which makes it even better. Well done! 

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Title : Dear me, I am sorry

Author's username : Yizhantrash

Title : 4/5
Plot : 8.5/10
Originality : 4.5/5
Characters : 9.2/10
Grammar : 9.3/10
Overall enjoyment : 4.5/5

Total : 40/45

Review :

Even though the title is plain, it actually clicks well with the content of your prompt. Besides that, almost everything in it is something that I have experienced except the committing suicide part. I'm genuinely thankful that you have realised that you're the only person whom you can depend on. Yes, you're who you are today, and I'm immensely proud of you for surviving that suicide attempt. Well done! 

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Title : To The Beautiful, Clumsy Me

Author's username : notyourwitch_

Title : 4.2/5
Plot : 8.5/10
Originality : 4.5/5
Characters : 8.8/10
Grammar : 8.5/10
Overall enjoyment : 4.5/5

Total : 39/45

Review :

You have a unique way of forming your thoughts and ideas into words. It's hilarious that I know some of your friends whom you have mentioned in your work. For example, the ones about Kaida and Dhruvi. Apart from that, you slowly build up the tension with your descriptions, and your voice will keep getting better and better as time passes. However, yours is already good enough, so I can't say much. It's also a good thing that I could see your personality in your writing. As a result, I could see you clearly which makes me appreciate your work more. Well done! 

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Title : A Message in a Bottle

Author's username : JH_Foliage

Title : 4.5/5
Plot : 9/10
Originality : 4.8/5
Characters : 8.5/10
Grammar : 9.5/10
Overall enjoyment : 4.8/5

Total : 41.1/45

Review :

Your hook is grammatically accurate and your work is loaded with sensory detail and beautiful descriptions. I truly appreciate the fact that you have delivered the messages by applying literary devices in your writing. This made me more engrossed with it. Plus, your ideas are fresh and raw. It is undeniable that I did enjoy reading your work. Well done! 

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Title : The Secret...

Author's username : BeingLively

Title : 4/5
Plot : 8.5/10
Originality : 4.5/5
Characters : 9/10
Grammar : 7.5/10
Overall enjoyment : 4.5/5

Total : 38/45

Review :

I literally could see the characters throughout the story. You really have put lots of thoughts into the prompt. Some of the parts were amusing as well, and I was entertained while reading them, especially the P.S. part. Overall, it was truly enjoyable reading yours even though it exceeds more than 500 words. Whatever happens, you have done your best, dear author. Well done! 

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Title : Curiosity Killed the Cat

Author's username : RRislife

Title : 4/5
Plot : 8.8/10
Originality : 4.5/5
Characters : 8.7/10
Grammar : 8.5/10
Overall enjoyment : 4.5/5

Total : 39/45

Review :

You have started yours with a unique beginning. Your own style and voice have been added into the story, and I could see you. By reading it once, I could notice your struggles in your life, and you also know yourself the best. Yes, I did enjoy reading your work. I also wonder if my younger self would laugh reading my older self's letter. Overall, well done! 

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Title : The River Under The Bridge

Author's username : sarcastic-mess

Title : 4.5/5
Plot : 8.5/10
Originality : 4.5/5
Characters : 9/10
Grammar : 9/10
Overall enjoyment : 4.5/5

Total : 40/45

Review :

After reading your work, I could see how the title clicks with the content. The connection could be seen clearly between them. Besides that, the effort that you have put into the prompt is outstanding. Even I got a great visual of the scene, setting and your character. I couldn't agree more with the fact that you have done an amazing job. Unfortunately, yours is more than 500 words in terms of the word limit. However, I believe that it's still okay. You just have to try following the stated word limit next time. Overall, well done!

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Title : Words For My World

Author's username : -vxnillamoon

Title : 4.5/5
Plot : 8.5/10
Originality : 4.5/5
Characters : 8.5/10
Grammar : 7.5/10
Overall enjoyment : 4.5/5

Total : 38/45

Review :

The moment I started reading your work, I knew that it would be something that I could relate with. You know yourself the best, and you're the person who knows what's the best for yourself. It might seem complicated but it's the truth. Besides that, your hook is also beautiful. It has its own speciality, and it leaves the readers thinking. To make things more interesting, It hits hard which is normal especially for those who have been in your situation before. Overall, you have done a great job. Well done! 

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winner

Title : Not A Pyramid Scheme

Author's username : 9Worlds

Title : 4.5/5
Plot : 9.5/10
Originality : 4.8/5
Characters : 9.5/10
Grammar : 9.5/10
Overall enjoyment : 4.8/5

Total : 42.6/45

Review :

I am extremely pleased with the title. It even has its own personality that pulls the right readers, and it clicks well with the content. Your plot is also unique and has its own sense of originality. The moment I started reading it, I had realised that there were no overused scenes or plots incorporated into your story. On top of that, your writing skill is unique and identifiable. I could see that you have the right level of maturity in writing. This makes your work stand out more. Overall, it was enjoyable reading your piece of masterpiece. Well done!