Grammatical Mistakes

Grammatical mistakes are easily the most egregious aspect of the Creepypasta. Bad grammar can distract the reader, but the errors in this story take the cake. Look, no writer is perfect. I get it. Even I will admit that I am far from a flawless writer. Still, did the author even bother to proofread?

For example, one part goes, "Yeah it definitely looked hacked, it was really creepy, but as a smart gamer, I wasn't scared (or at least I tried not to be), I told myself that it was just a hacked game and there's nothing wrong with that." If one were to read that sentence aloud, they would have to take a breath. No sentence should ever be like that.