💤Short Story Winners!

❤1ST PLACE!

Title: The Color of your Soul
Author: NawsheenSadia

Title: 10/10;
The title has a great uniqueness to it.

Blurb /Synopsis: 10/10 ;
The synopsis is great and correspondent to the story.

Cover: 10/10;
The color is great and colorful, generally in correspondence to the story title.

Cast: 10/10

Plot: 10/10;
The plot is so unpredictable. So thrilling.

Character development: 13/15;
The characters are great, and so random in a good way.

Originality: 10/10;
The story ideas is rather unique. I can really see the story's originality.

Grammar, SP, and punctuations: 20/20;
The grammar is fine, the sentencing, paragraphing and all.

Rating: 5/5;
The book is interesting, so unique and thrilling. It keeps you excited for more.

TOTAL= 93/100 + 5/5 Stars.

💙2ND PLACE!

Title: Tales of mona
Author: dinma_write

Title: 10/10
The title fits well with the story and I love how charming it is. It's also very original, as there are no other books with that title!

Blurb/synopsis: 5/10
Your blurb is fine but It doesn't really draw the reader in. Also, it gives away that she dies, which might make certain readers apt to decide against reading it.

Cover: 9/10
The cover is really nice, I think it fits well with the vibe of your story, however, I think it would be good if the full title of the book was on the cover. Other than that it's great!

Cast/ cover aesthetics/ prologue: 10/10

Plot: 15/15
I really loved the plot actually, it pulled me in and I almost couldn't stop myself from reading the whole book. I must say that you have a beautiful way with words and I think you did a great job with it!

Character/ character development: 15/15
Mona has such a beautiful soul and she really was such a lovable character. I could feel myself growing to completely love her. You made me feel for every character and I applaud you for that!

Originality: 10/10
The story was perfectly charming and I could feel myself slipping into the little world you've created, I was entranced and I really couldn't stop from reading more! It was original and a breath of fresh air to read!

Grammar/ spelling and punctuation: 18/20
Over all, your book has little to no mistakes which is a pretty great accomplishment in itself, however, the title of the book is not capitalized. A few touch ups in punctuation and capitalization and that's it, your book is ready to go!

Rating: 5/5 stars
I really did enjoy going over your book and I'm honored to have been able to read it, you did an amazing job and you truly have a way with words. I hope that you continue to write and I hope that along the way you will enchant a plethora of readers with your charming writing as you have with me! The best of luck! ️

Total: 92/100 + 5/5 stars

💙3RD PLACE!

Title: The Seven Virtues of Life
Author: Xanatos271

Title: 10/10
The title is original, there are no other books with that as the title! It's also very interesting and leaves the reader wanting to know more!

Cover: 8/10
The cover is cute and I think it goes perfectly with the book, but the font and placing of the words made it difficult for me to read at first. Other than that, I think the cover is great!

Blurb/ synopsis: 8/10
The blurb tells exactly what readers are getting into, it describes everything in a short and sweet way. I do wish there was a bit more of a pull, it doesn't really make me interested to read more.

Cover aesthetics/cast and prologue: 10/10

Plot: 15/15
The plot is very original and interesting! I love the idea of it all and I think you did a great job! I love how each story ends up pulling together and I find that it's cute and enthralling at the same time!

Character and character development: 15/15
The characters were cute and I love how we can read along their journey, watching as they grow and start to find themselves, in fact, I think you did a marvelous job at making them sound like real teens!

Originality: 10/10
The idea of the book is wonderful! It's original and I love where it's headed, in fact, I wanted to keep reading! Great job on that!

Grammar/ spelling and punctuation: 15/20
Your book actually had little to no mistakes, which you should be very proud of! However, every once in a while I would find a few grammar and punctuation mistakes. Brush up on that and you're good to go!

Rating: 4.5/5 stars
The book was refreshing and adorable! I loved everything about it and could feel myself falling in love with each of the characters! You truly are a wonderful writer and I hope you will continue on your writing adventure, enchanting readers along the way! The best of luck! ️

Total: 91/100 + 4/5 stars

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