💤Mystery/Thriller Winners!

1ST PLACE!

Title: Bamboo doesn’t grow in dark spaces
Author: LibraPhoenix

Title: 10/10
Cover: 10/10
Cast/Character Aesthetics/Prologue: 9/10
Plot: 15/15
Character/Character Development: 15/15
Originality: 10/10
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: 20/20
Rating: 5/5 stars
Total: (99/100)

Review: BEAUTIFUL truly BEAUTIFUL! Honestly if I had to choose between this book and the Bamboo one I’m not sure if that would even be possible. These were honestly the best two I have read so far (I’m not sure if the next one would be able to live up lolol). I could find no problem with this book, that’s how good it was! Perfectly paced, grammar wasn’t a problem, and things were so interesting at the start.

💙2ND PLACE!

Title: Wreckage
Author: @TejashreeSubhashAyre

Title: 10/10
Cover: 9/10
Cast/Character Aesthetics/Prologue: 9/10
Plot: 15/15
Character/Character Development: 15/15
Originality: 10/10
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: 20/20
Rating: 4/5 stars
Total: (92/100)

Review: This is a very good book, there’s nothing wrong with it besides a couple of grammar errors, but other than that I rather enjoyed it. Of course there’s always room for improvement and I think with a bit more detail the story would be that much better, but other than that, I have no more notes. After all the idea is very well done and I was reminded a bit of Beauty and the Beast when I was reading it which was very nice to see. Keep writing! I’m sure with practice, your style and works will grow along with you

Title: The Chronicles of Aspen Quinn: Alias
Author: EmberWritesSometimes

Title: 10/10

Cover: 8/10

Cast/Character Aesthetics/Prologue: 8/10

Plot: 15/15

Character/Character Development: 15/15

Originality: 10/10

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: 19/20

Rating: 4/5 stars (89/100)

Review: Okay this was literally the best one I have read so far and after reading the last two with a lot of errors and things that needed to be fixed, it was a great refresher. Even though things aren’t as descriptive and move pretty fast, the author somehow manages to make it work. I have fallen in love with the main character, and pray that she is able to get better. I still don’t know how a 10 year old girl can be so smart and awesome tho! It literally blew my mind! Things were so suspenseful and interesting and each case had the best level of mystery and edge of the seat moments that I completely fell in love with it. However, I do think that doing so many cases in one book is a bit strange; it's like one ends and then we move onto the next one. Best tip I could say is to make it like the Sherlock Holmes books. Each book is a new case instead of each chapter or a few chapters. It’s not a bad thing to drag things out a bit. Other than that, great job writing and I can’t wait to see what else you make! I’m rooting for you!

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