💤Humor Winners!

FIRST PLACE!❤

Title: Hostel Life
Author: AkoOku

Title: 10/10

Blurb: 10/10

Cover: 9/10

Cast/Character Aesthetics/Prologue: 10/10

Plot: 13/15

Characters/Character Development: 14/15

Originality: 10/10

Grammar, Spelling, and Punctuation: 19/20

Rating: 5/5 stars

Total: 95/100 + 5/5 stars

Review:
Your title, blurb, and cover gave me a really strong impression of your book. I really liked the concept of your story, and there were little to no grammatical mistakes. The only suggestion I would give is to describe to use your dialogue to provide information about each character, rather than just stating an event. Overall, your story gave me a really strong impression of your writing, and I loved your story!

2ND PLACE!💙


Title: The Blue Flames

Author: Moonlight44567

Title: 10/10

Blurb: 9/10

Cover: 10/10

Cast/Character Aesthetics/Prologue: 10/10

Plot: 14/15

Characters/Character Development: 13/15

Originality: 10/10

Grammar, Spelling, and Punctuation: 18/20

Rating: 3/5 stars

Total: 93/100 + 3/5 stars

Review:
I really liked your cover, and how it correlated to the title. I found a few grammatical mistakes in the blurb, so I would recommend checking over that. I also found a few formatting issues, like a random return or space, in the book, so I would suggest that you edit it. I really liked your vivid descriptions; it wasn't overdone or anything like that. Overall, I really liked the plot of the story; it certainly intrigued me, and it was quite unique.

3RD PLACE!💛

Title: Gabriel
Author: HeraHarker

Title: 9/10

Blurb/Synopsis: 9/10

Cover: 10/10

Cast/aesthetics/prologue: 9/10

Plot: 14/15

Characters/Character development: 13/15

Originality: 10/10

Spag: 18/20

Rating: 5/5

Total: 92/100 + 5/5

Review:
Your book is AMAZING! I absolutely loved it! Everything about it was great; the concept, the way it's written, the cover and blurb. Keep up the good work!

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