💤Humor Winners!
FIRST PLACE!❤
Title: Hostel Life
Author: AkoOku
Title: 10/10
Blurb: 10/10
Cover: 9/10
Cast/Character Aesthetics/Prologue: 10/10
Plot: 13/15
Characters/Character Development: 14/15
Originality: 10/10
Grammar, Spelling, and Punctuation: 19/20
Rating: 5/5 stars
Total: 95/100 + 5/5 stars
Review:
Your title, blurb, and cover gave me a really strong impression of your book. I really liked the concept of your story, and there were little to no grammatical mistakes. The only suggestion I would give is to describe to use your dialogue to provide information about each character, rather than just stating an event. Overall, your story gave me a really strong impression of your writing, and I loved your story!
2ND PLACE!💙
Title: The Blue Flames
Author: Moonlight44567
Title: 10/10
Blurb: 9/10
Cover: 10/10
Cast/Character Aesthetics/Prologue: 10/10
Plot: 14/15
Characters/Character Development: 13/15
Originality: 10/10
Grammar, Spelling, and Punctuation: 18/20
Rating: 3/5 stars
Total: 93/100 + 3/5 stars
Review:
I really liked your cover, and how it correlated to the title. I found a few grammatical mistakes in the blurb, so I would recommend checking over that. I also found a few formatting issues, like a random return or space, in the book, so I would suggest that you edit it. I really liked your vivid descriptions; it wasn't overdone or anything like that. Overall, I really liked the plot of the story; it certainly intrigued me, and it was quite unique.
3RD PLACE!💛
Title: Gabriel
Author: HeraHarker
Title: 9/10
Blurb/Synopsis: 9/10
Cover: 10/10
Cast/aesthetics/prologue: 9/10
Plot: 14/15
Characters/Character development: 13/15
Originality: 10/10
Spag: 18/20
Rating: 5/5
Total: 92/100 + 5/5
Review:
Your book is AMAZING! I absolutely loved it! Everything about it was great; the concept, the way it's written, the cover and blurb. Keep up the good work!
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