❤1ST PLACE!

Title: The Art of Unrequited
Author: hiddenbottle

• Title (10/10)
• Blurb (9/10)
• Cover (8/10)
• Cast/Character Aesthetics/Prologue (10/10)
• Plot (13/15)
• Character/Character Development (15/15)
• Originality (4/10)
• Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation (12/20)
• Rating (5/5 stars)
• Total (81/100 + 5/5 stars)

Review: I really like your writing style, everything felt natural and I loved the conversation between characters, it was very realistic. Thankfully, I didn’t have to stop at every sentence to correct your grammar in my head, but you do need to proofread your work and use proper punctuation after dialogue, plus I saw some un-capitalized words here and there. Your story idea is quite common, the topic of unrequited love being a famous one, but you found a way to implement your own style into it and I like the way the MC has her own family drama to deal with and doesn’t immediately fall for the male protagonist at first glance. This story has great potential and I can’t wait to see how the plot progresses.

💙2ND PLACE!

Title: Mr and Mrs childless
Author: aderonke02

• Title (10/10)
• Blurb (6/10)
• Cover (2/10)
• Cast/Character Aesthetics/Prologue (10/10)
• Plot (14/15)
• Character/Character Development (12/15)
• Originality (7/10)
• Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation (0/20)
• Rating (3/5 stars)
• Total (61/100 + 3/5 stars)

Review: I actually really love your story idea, although the whole can’t-have-a-baby plot is common, you found a way to add your own twist to it by blaming the man instead of the woman. The title really grabbed my attention and made me excited to read the book, but I feel like your cover could be improved. I know you stated that English is not your first language, but I spotted too many run-on sentences, misspelled words, lack of capitalization and misused punctuation. Please try and edit your work because the layout is interesting but all the grammar mistakes really bring it down.

💛3RD PLACE!

Title: Mr. Nerd Has A Secret
Author: jovan1monge

• Title (5/10)
• Blurb (4/10)
• Cover (9/10)
• Cast/Character Aesthetics/Prologue (10/10)
• Plot (6/15)
• Character/Character Development (10/15)
• Originality (4/10)
• Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation (0/20)
• Rating (2/5 stars)
• Total (48/100 + 2/5 stars)

Review: It was really hard for me to read your book because it was riddled with many grammar errors and you often forget to leave a space when a new person is speaking, as well as forgetting to add punctuation marks here and there. The blurb alone needs to be edited because I could barely understand the point of the story, what makes it unique from every other famous-kid-at-high-school plot? The title is idealistic, it sums up the book very nicely, though from what I’ve read you haven’t given him any nerd qualities or traits yet, he seems like the average teenage heartthrob. I actually like your cover because it’s straightforward and relates with your story. Again your story idea is very common, but I do like how you wrote it from the famous boys’ perspective.

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