Half Hope, Half Love by: lily97000
Requested by: lily97000

I got to say that I really like the story so far. I also liked the pacing.

It's pretty and I enjoyed reading about the characters so far as well. I liked the main character Hazel and how she has to deal with her feelings for her friend/boss all while trying to help him get to together with her older sister throughout the story. I also liked how we get hints to Heath possibly liking her at some point in the story after we find out that Hazel's sister cheats on him and Heath basically telling Hazel that she didn't like the fact that her sister was marrying him because she was jealous. Which is a normal thing to feel for anyone who's been in a similar situation just like what Hazel is going through herself. It really shows how complex and complicated these characters are, not only as people but individuals as well. And it really shows how much depth they have in just a few chapters alone. Which totally left me impressed.

Plus there was hardly any grammar errors in the story and was amazed to learn that English wasn't your first language which I got to say that the writing was totally good and very fluent and couldn't hardly tell that English wasn't your first language. So again very impressive. You did a good job on your writing as well.

Overall, it's a great story and has a amazing plot and would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly