Illusions by: skylar3006
Requested by: skylar3006

First off, I love the cover of your book. It's really beautiful and it really draws you into the story and it tells what the story could possibly be about as well.

I also like your writing style and pacing of the story but I do have a small problem with how short your chapters are. It's fine to keep some chapters short like maybe 5 or six pages long but yours seem to be only one page. Like you could easily combined the first few chapters into one chapter or two if you wanted, so readers had something more to read than like three or five sentences.

Other than that, there was no grammar errors. So good job on that as well.

Overall, it's a great story but I would recommend making your chapters a bit long. Plus I would recommend this book to anyone who wants to read it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly