Review#67

She's Feisty by: euphemian
Requested by: euphemian

I thought the story and plot were okay in my opinion. But it felt a lot like any other teen fiction novel that I have seen or read. I also saw a few grammatical errors in your book as well, so I would recommend fixing it.

Also I thought the pacing of the story was a bit fast.
In my opinion, you could have taken the time to set up a bit more of the story and characters and then get into the plot. But of course that's just my opinion on the matter.

Overall, it's a good book and would recommend this book to anyone who's interested in reading it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly

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