Things I see by: TearsThatRain037
Requested by: TearsThatRain037

I actually enjoyed this story so far and the plot of it. I liked the twist on the whole werewolf story that you would normally find here on Wattpad where the main female character Vanessa, seeing other people's thoughts on their skin, making her stand out as a person and not just being some human who falls in love with a werewolf.

I enjoyed this aspect of it because you don't really find a whole lot of it in the usual vampire or werewolf stories which is nice. Rarely would you find something like it unless it was a fantasy novel focusing on other creatures that aren't vampires or werewolves as the main focus of the story. Plus a lot of the usual vampire and werewolf have a human/vampire or human/werewolf relationship, but this one hints at her possibly being a werewolf too. I mean on the rare occasion, we might have two people being vampires or werewolves in this kind of genre but it doesn't happen often enough as it is and if it does, it still gets treated like a forbidden romance even though they're both the same species and the main female character being shy and soft spoken or hating the male character at first glance or vise verses.

Plus I didn't really find any grammar errors that I knew of. Good job on that part as well.

Overall, it's a great story and yes, it has tropes that you would normally find in other books like it but it has a unique twist on it that makes it stand out from the others and would totally recommend this book to anyone who wants to read it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly