Tied to Mr. B by: csuigar
Requested by: csuigar

I thought the plot was interesting and didn't really find a lot of grammar errors which didn't affect the story much. So good job on that part.

Also make sure that your paragraphs aren't walls of text so, it isn't hard to read the dialogue, so I would recommend fixing that.

Overall, it's a good story and has a good plot and would recommend this book to anyone who likes reading books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly