Castle (The badland Series) by: EmberShy
Requested by: EmberShy

I really enjoyed the plot and story so far and like the idea for a writer being sucked into their book and having to experience what's happening within that world and its characters. Plus there wasn't really grammar errors that I could find.

So good job on that as well.

But I will say that you should probably stop and describe things a bit more so, the readers get a better idea on what things look like. Overall, it's a good story and can't wait to read more about it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly