7 days: Katsuki Bakugou x Reader by: katsukifangirl2004
Requested by: katsukifangirl2004

Okay, so, I just want to say that I have never watched my hero academia before so I went into this totally not knowing much about it but I did still find the story and plot interesting. There was just something that bothered me a lot while reading this fanfic and that the fact you had your sentences and descriptions mashed together a lot within this story which is something you don't see in stories like ever unless it flowed well enough for you to do this.

Here is are some examples of what I am talking about:

Like a lot of your character's dialogue is mashed together and it's hard to tell who's talking. Plus it's hard to tell where the sentences begin and where they end.

Like if you had separates them from each other then it would make it easier to tell who's talking and who isn't and what is being described within that moment. There are maybe like a couple sentences where you do this but most of it is just mashed together and hard to read because of it not being separated.

Like in most of not all books, you don't see this because they have been edited and improved upon. I definitely recommend that you edit this a bit because it definitely will be better if you did this because it will make easier to read for your readers who like reading fanfic especially about my hero academia.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly