When night comes by: xohrats
Requested by: xohrats

I actually really enjoyed this book despite at first not sure on wether or not I really was going to like it.

It has a interesting plot so far despite being two chapters long so not much happened but that's fine.

I love the main character and her personality. She's has a troubled past and isn't annoying whatsoever as far I could tell. Plus I am interested in how she became queen in the future.
I also love the lore and history of your book so far, well done on that front.

I didn't see any grammar errors whatsoever as well. Well done on that part as well.

Overall, it's a great story and I would to see more of it and how it turns out in the end. So, I would totally recommend this book to anyone who loves reading mature fantasy books with its own style of history.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly