Queen clumsy by: puh_lease_bitch
Requested by: puh_lease_bitch

First let's talk about the cover of the book. I loved the cover of the book. I liked the colors and font of the book. I think it really makes the title stand out more and the cover also looks very inviting as well.

Next is the summary of the book. I thought the summary was fine. I think it gets the point across of what the story is about without giving too much away while also drawing in the reader.

Next is the writing structure and grammatical errors.
First let's talk about grammatical errors. Didn't see any as far as I could tell. Thought the grammar was fine and didn't affect the story in any way.
Next up is writing structure. The writing structure I think is okay. Everything flowed well just fine and none of it felt awkward from the first few chapters that I did read of the book.

Next let's talk about pacing and plot of the book. First let's discuss pacing. The pacing is good. It sets up the story fine and even the plot and characters which I'll get to in a bit as well. Which I think is important since it can sometimes be hard to do this if you don't have a general idea on how or where you want the story to go. Next is the plot. The plot even though, it's usually something we see a lot of in romance books, I thought was done pretty good in my opinion. It didn't feel rushed and felt like I was actually enjoying the story and characters. Overall good job.

Finally let's talk about characters and settings. The settings will be the first thing I talk about here. I liked the setting a lot and thought it was described fine.  Finally let's talk about the characters of the book. Even though I liked the pacing of the story and how it sets up the characters like I mentioned earlier, I do have something that I wanted to mention here. And that is that I wish we got see more of the older sister being interested in taking over the family business and the younger sister not being interested it. I felt like that was a bit rushed in my personal opinion. I felt like we could have had a bit more on this, like maybe seeing what the older sister thought of her sister being forced to do what their parents wanted from her point of view and not just the younger sister. Overall, thought the characters were fine nonetheless.

Overall, the story was pretty solid and would definitely recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly