An imbalance's world by: Imbalanced_wreck
Requested by: Imbalanced_wreck

First off I want to talk about the cover of the book. I thought it fits with what you're trying to go for but I did notice that the cover is lacking a title on it. I think if it had the title of the book and your name on it then it might help draw in readers. Now I know it's not easy to make a cover especially if you're a beginner or don't have much experience when making one, but there are people here on Wattpad who can help make one if you need help doing so. So it might be a good idea to see what apps that would work for you to try and make one or try and see if there's anyone wanting to help you in making one since they're going to have some knowledge on it and will make a cover according to what you want for the cover.

Next is the summary of the book. The summary I thought was pretty solid. It told what the story was about and didn't too much away.

Next is the writing structure and grammatical errors. The writing structure I think was fine and didn't see anything wrong with it. Next is the grammatical errors. I didn't see any grammatical errors in the book, which was good. So no need to go over it here.

Now it's time for the pacing and plot of the story. First is the pacing of the book. The pacing, I thought was fine. It didn't feel too rushed or anything as far as I could tell which is good. Next is the plot. The plot was pretty solid. Thought the idea of characters being related to fictional manga characters was an interesting idea. Along with the main character wanting to show that imbalances are people too.

Finally is the descriptions and characters. First let's talk about the descriptions. The descriptions are pretty okay. You described just enough to let the readers know what's going on and things looked like. Which is nice. Plus the paragraphs were just fine as well. Finally are the characters. The characters were fine as well. Liked the dynamic between them as well. Plus, they didn't feel too rushed either.

Overall, it's a solid book and would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly