Broken by: Noorulhudaprincess
Requested by: Noorulhudaprincess

First let's talk about the cover of the book. I loved the cover of the book. Thought it fits the theme of the book and I loved the blue color and how simple the cover was with the girl drawing the heart on it.

Next is the summary. I liked the summary. Thought it gave you some idea on the plot of the book was going to be about without giving too much away.

Next is the writing structure and grammatical errors.
First is the writing structure which I thought was fine and had no problem with whatsoever. As for the grammatical errors, I didn't really see any other than maybe a couple of sentence structure errors like when she goes to throw the glass into the dishwasher but the sentence ends up reading dust bin (British English for garage bin or trash). Which I was confused on at first cuz the glass didn't break so I guessed that the author meant dishwasher there. Just one example that I could think of there. Other than that, it was fine.

Now it's time to talk about pacing and plot of the story. First I thought the pacing was fine. It didn't seemed rushed which was good since it gave time to help set up characters and their personalities. The plot was okay and thought it showed someone was broken pretty okay for what it was.

Finally it's talk about descriptions/settings and the characters. First let's talk about the settings/descriptions. The settings were fine but I wished things were a bit more descriptive. Like the descriptions were fine, I just wish there was more of it. If that makes sense. Considering that a good amount is spend at school or at home in the beginning of the story.

Finally let's talk about the characters. I thought the characters were fine. Their personalities were okay since we were still getting to know them and their personalities etc. but I also wish they were better described as well. Okay so they were also described fine but again they could have been described more so we had a better idea on what they looked like. But other than that, that's all I have to say on that.

Overall, it's a pretty solid story and would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly