In Translation - An Essay by: Amaranthinepoetry
Requested by: Amaranthinepoetry

I liked the cover of the book. I liked the bird on it and I also liked the font and color of it as well.

I also found the summary to be good too since it is about self discovery and found no problem with it being short in this case since it is a essay on the author's own personal experience growing up in another country.

I also liked the writing structure and found no grammatical errors whatsoever.

Okay so, I personally enjoyed the essay and how the author's goes into explaining what it was for them to experience knowing two languages in a country and how it affected them in school and outside of school. Of course I don't know what it's like knowing two languages or growing up where I speak one language at home and another at school but I thought it was interesting to hear about it and how, I am sure a lot of people can understand this, have to deal with this on a daily basis especially when you're a kid and feel like you don't fit into the social norm. Which is a very relatable feeling for most people.

I also liked how it dived into how we should be able to push past language barriers and how it can be a good thing to connect to people we might never be able to connect to before especially when you're learning another language or already speak it.

Overall, I would recommend reading this essay especially you enjoy reading something like this and would encourage people to learn another language and to give it a try cause who knows, you might end up connecting to someone you might have never known otherwise.

Thanks for letting me review your essay.

-Traveler_lilly