Beyond my expectations by:youngWwriter
Requested by: youngWwriter

I like the story and the plot so far but there are a few words missing from your story which don't affect the story that much. I would recommend going back and editing it a bit.

Also chapter 3 listing the names of the main characters isn't needed cause you could have easily made chapter 4 into chapter 3 instead and not include a list of the main characters names in the story because authors don't really do that in the middle of the story let alone title it chapter 3. It just doesn't serve any purpose in the plot or story.

Overall it's a good story and would recommend editing it a bit.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly