Review# 153
The Elements Divide by: Bookish_Erudite
Requested by: Bookish_Erudite
First off like always, I want to talk about the cover of the book. I really liked the cover and I loved the colors and how well it looked.
I also enjoyed the pacing and plot of the story and didn't see really any grammar errors that affected the story too much.
I also liked how you gave different names to each of the four kingdoms like the earth kingdoms being called the weeds or the water kingdom being called the divers.
I also liked the characters as well so far and the story gave me that avatar the last air bender sort of vibe to it as I was reading it which I thought was pretty cool since I loved avatar the last air bender as a kid growing up.
Overall, it's a great story and I would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.
Thanks for letting me review your book.
-Traveler_lilly
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