Conversation Cafeteria by: Snugstudybug
Requested by: Snugstudybug

First off I want to talk about the cover and the summary of the book. First let's talk about the summary. The summary is interesting and totally makes me curious on reading the story, but I do feel like also at the same time, it doesn't. I like how you did a paragraph from the story as well but I wish you gave a little more on what the story was actually about. Again having a paragraph from the story in your summary is fine but it shouldn't be the entire summary of the book. 

Like maybe have a small paragraph from the story like a couple lines of dialogue and describing a small moment in the book then put what the book is about so it will give readers a much clearer idea on what the story is about rather than the summary being a paragraph like I just mentioned, that way readers aren't left with a vague idea of what the story is about and it will make them interested in wanting to read the book.

Next I want to talk about the cover of the book. The cover in all honesty, needs some work. I felt like you just found a picture of a glass on a table and slapped it on and called it good. I know it can be hard trying to find someone to make a cover for you or even just making a cover yourself, but there are amazing people here on Wattpad that can help you make one if you're having trouble making a cover for your book.

Or you can use cover apps like the Wattpad cover maker to help you make a cover until you can find someone who can help make one or until you practice making better covers for your book. This can be very helpful especially if you want more people to be interested in reading your book and want to draw the reader into the story. So, I would recommend looking up cover workshops here on Wattpad and see who can help make a cover or look book cover apps can assist you in making a cover for your book.

Next, I want to talk about the pacing and grammar errors of the story. The pacing was fine and there wasn't any grammar errors that I could find so good job on that.

The last few things that I want to talk about are setting, plot and characters. First off I want to talk about the setting of the book. I thought the setting was nice and I liked how you described places and things within the world as well. Second is the plot of the story. Now I am interested to see where the plot of the story goes since the therapist seems interested about learning about the main character's past and why she seems to need help. This also leads me into talking about the characters. I thought the characters were interesting so far and I am curious to learn more about them as the story continues and where they end up by the end of the story.

Overall, it was a okay story and I would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly