A fanged felony by: RabDanRum
Requested by: RabDanRum

First off I want to say that I liked the cover of the book. It definitely has that fantasy vibe to it and shows that the book will have fantasy elements to it later on as the story goes on and the world is expanded upon.

But I did see one minor grammar error within chapter 2 with the name Chloe being misspelled but other than that, there wasn't any other grammar errors in the book.

Plus I enjoyed the pacing and the plot of the story so far as well. I enjoyed the fact that you set up the characters and world first before introducing the fantasy element to the story.

Overall, it's a good story and I would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly