Fourteen days: Fall in love at least once by: Psycholmaginator1813
Requested by: Psycholmaginator1813

First off I want to talk about the cover of the book. The cover is pretty and is cute with the heart that they made in the middle. Plus, I like the color in the cover as well.

I also didn't see any grammar errors in your book too.

I liked the pacing and plot of the story as well. I thought the plot was interesting and unique since I haven't read a book where it expands over the course of a few days where the main character falls in love in their senior year of high school.

But I do have one negativity about your book that bugged me quite a bit while I was reading it. And that would be the writing style and how certain actions were written throughout the book. Let's start with the actions first. Some of the actions as I was reading the book were in bold font and in parentheses while the characters would talk to one another about something and I felt like that wasn't necessary since you don't need to put actions in parentheses and in bold font while someone is talking since we already know what they're doing while talking before/after talking about something in that moment. Which brings me to the writing style of the book. To be honest, I wasn't too sure about the writing style since I wasn't sure if it was supposed to be written like a script or like text messages since whenever someone talked, it had ':' next to their name and then the action on bold font or what they're saying and then the action. Which if I am being honest, I didn't like at all. Plus, the names of the characters were repeated a bunch of times throughout the story as well which I also felt wasn't necessary in the book. It's good if you had the names in there like at most five times in each chapter since we don't need to see their name a dozen times throughout the chapters of the book cause it can be annoying after a while if used too much. But I do understand that you want to tell the readers who is talking and who isn't but you don't need to have their name brought up a bunch of times in order to do that. A good way to tell by who is talking in that moment is well by the way they talk. If you can have a way to make certain characters have a certain way of talking then it's easier to tell on who is talking and who isn't in that moment of time.

Overall, I did think it's a good story and I would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly