Iris by: Nadnoud
Requested by: Nadnoud

I will start with the cover of the book. I think it's a very pretty cover despite how simple is since it is an action novel and I can't wait to see how the title comes into play later in the story. But I did notice something on the cover that bugged me a bit. Just above the title I noticed some words that I am sure isn't a part of the title itself. It's hard to notice on the phone app but on the IPad or computer version it's more noticeable if you look closer at it. So you might want to get ride of those two words on the cover since they're not a part of the actual title.

I also thought that the pacing was nice as well since you get to see what the main character is like before the plot really picks up. Plus I didn't see any grammatical errors in your story as well. So, good job on that.

But I also want to talk about the characters as well. I wished we got to see more of the main character's best friend rather than just have her in one chapter since we don't get to see a lot of the relationship between the best friend and main character. Speaking of the main character, I just didn't like the main character. I found her to be a bit annoying.
As much as I liked her spirit and stubborn attitude to not be bullied, I also found it to be annoying at times as well.

But overall, it's a good book and I would recommend it to anyone who likes reading books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly