Writing Contest Results

AAAND NOW, EARTHLINGS, WE HAVE THE RESULTS!!
I SPENT HOURS SITTING AND TRYING TO DECIDE THE PLACES, ALL OF THEM WERE FIRST PLACE WORTHY
ANYWHO
I NEED TO CALM DOWN

Also:
If I suggest or say something about your story that you disagree with or take offense to, I'm deeply sorry. If you want, I can take the section down. Also, please don't say thing like: "What?!" or "I should've won!" Be good sports ^^

{And if you don't win, It's okay. There will be more contests in the future.}

NOW FOR THE RESULTS




In third place, we have OpalQuill with her story about a mother husky trying to get her two remaining pups to their father's pack of wolves, when they stray into the wrong territory.
- I thought this plot was very interesting and had great grammar. I couldn't find one misspelled word or incorrect grammar. Though, I found the story a little confusing at times. I had to read some things over to understand fully.
Overall, though, an amazing story line!

In second place, we have Silverteeth with her story about a she-wolf being betrayed by an ally.
- The feelings of the she wolf were very strong and I practically felt her fear when she was betrayed. You did a wonderful job with the tone though however, there was a lack of character description. Describe what the main character or the pup look like.
Overall, a great story that gives the FEELS

And finally, in first place, Foxy_Skipper ! With her story about a warrior of ShadowClan named Wolfheart dying to save her clanmate from a fight he and his other clanmate were having. Wolfheart did not, however go to StarClan or the Dark Forest, she became a Green Soul.
- I thought this was absolutely GENIUS for a plot line and just the whole idea of the story was very smart! It leaves a sense of mystery and dread when Fido tells Wolfheart that Green Souls weren't supposed to die or have something they need to finish. It left me questioning and wanting more of the story. You could have, however, described Wolfheart a little more. Otherwise, amazing idea!

Congrats, Foxy_Skipper for winning this contest!

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