'BEST PLOT TWIST' RESULTS
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The moment we've all been waiting for has finally arrived, dear fairies and magical beings! Welcome to The Golden Petal Awards, where we gather to honor the remarkable achievements of our talented participants.
I am Xtisapi, your host for this wondrous occasion, filled with glittering excitement and boundless joy. It is with great honor that I stand before you all, ready to celebrate the hard work and dedication of our participants.
Each one has displayed extraordinary talent and skill in their chosen categories, and it is a true blessing to be able to recognize their magical contributions.
So let us begin this enchanting celebration and cast a brilliant spotlight on our well-deserving winners!
JUDGE: FaeHanna_05
⭑*•̩̩͙⊱••••DRUM ROLL PLEASE••••̩̩͙⊰•*⭑
FIRST PLACE WINNER FOR 'BEST PLOT TWIST' CATEGORY IS........
╰┈➤BLOOD PACT༊*·˚
https://www.wattpad.com/story/366493335-blood-pact
Originality (30 points): 29/30
Impact on Story (25 points): 25/25
Foreshadowing and Build-up (20 points):18/20
Emotional Response (15 points): 14/15
Total:- 86/90
REVIEW:
I just finished Blood Pact, and I have to say, it was an amazing read, but not without its flaws. Let me start by saying the story hooked me from the beginning, and I was genuinely invested the entire way through. However, it did have quite a few grammatical mistakes that really stood out. I think with some editing, those could easily be cleaned up, and it would make the flow of the book even better. But honestly, the mistakes didn't take away too much from the overall experience, because the plot itself was so gripping.
Speaking of the plot—wow. It was really unexpected! Usually, I can guess the plot twists in books like this, but Blood Pact managed to surprise me in a way that doesn't happen often. The way the story opened up kept me on my toes, and I loved how it wasn't predictable. The twist at the end was epic. I was literally sitting there, stunned, trying to piece everything together.
Now, let's talk about the characters. Ruby, in particular, was such a standout for me. Her character added a level of spice and unpredictability that I didn't even know I needed in the story. She was fierce, complex, and just brought so much life to the narrative. I felt like whenever Ruby was on the page, the energy shifted, and I couldn't help but get more into it. Her choices, her attitude—it just worked so well with the tone of the book.
However, I do have one critique when it comes to the twist. While it was amazing and caught me off guard, I felt like there weren't enough hints leading up to it. Yes, it was a shocker, but at the same time, I felt like it kind of came out of nowhere. It was covered up nicely towards the end, so I won't complain too much, but I wish there had been a little more buildup to that moment. It would have made the twist feel even more satisfying.
Oh, and the comic strips at the end. Genius! That was such a nice touch. It added some charm and levity to what was a pretty intense story. After going through all the emotions the book put me through, those little strips at the end felt like a reward. They made me smile, and I appreciated that little bit of extra content.
In the end, the story did break me, though. Without spoiling anything, I'll just say I was really rooting for things to turn out differently. I was so invested in the characters and their journey that I felt a bit heartbroken by the conclusion. Part of me wishes there was a different outcome—like, why couldn't they just be together?! But I understand that sometimes stories don't end the way we want them to. I can't deny that it was an unforgettable experience.
SECOND PLACE WINNER FOR 'BEST PLOT TWIST' CATEGORY IS........
╰┈➤TRUTH༊*·˚
https://www.wattpad.com/story/363001944-truth
Originality (30 points): 29/30
Impact on Story (25 points): 25/25
Foreshadowing and Build-up (20 points): 18/20
Emotional Response (15 points): 13/15
Total:- 85/90
REVIEW:
Truth is one of those books that catches you off guard. It has a lot of plot twists, and just when you think you've figured everything out, the story takes another turn. At first, I thought the breakup between Jane and Mattheo was the plot of the book, but it wasn't. It was just the beginning, a build-up to something bigger. I loved how the twists kept coming, and it made the story unpredictable in a really exciting way.
Jane was by far my favorite. Her character felt real and relatable. I connected with her struggles and her journey, especially the way she dealt with truth and her emotions. Mattheo, on the other hand, felt like a bit of a mystery. He's important to the story, but I wish his emotions were explored more deeply. It felt like he was always there, moving the plot forward, but we didn't get to understand him as much as Jane.
Now, let's talk about Mr. Peters. Wow, what a character! He was such a pleasant surprise. I didn't expect him to be as clever and impactful as he was. He added a lot of depth to the story. He was a secondary character, but in many ways, he stole the show for me. Then there's Crook, who I absolutely hated — and I think that's exactly what the you wanted. He's written in such a way that you can't help but dislike him. It's not easy to create a character that readers love to hate, but Crook was definitely one of those.
One of the best parts of the book was the ending. After everything the characters went through, the wedding at the end was a perfect way to close the story. It felt like all the chaos and drama had finally come to a satisfying conclusion. The fact that everyone was happy in the end made it even better.
Overall, it was a good read. The plot twists kept me hooked, the story was engaging and full of surprises. The theme of truth was something I think everyone can connect with.
THIRD PLACE WINNER FOR 'BEST PLOT TWIST' CATEGORY IS........
╰┈➤MY DOG SEES SOMETHING I DON'T༊*·˚
https://www.wattpad.com/story/372092846-my-dog-sees-something-i-don%27t
Originality (30 points): 25/30
Impact on Story (25 points): 20/25
Foreshadowing and Build-up (20 points): 15/20
Emotional Response (15 points): 10/15
Total Score: 70/90
REVIEW:
You've got a solid story with a strong twist, but it feels like you didn't push it as far as you could have. The idea of a loyal dog turning into the real danger is definitely intriguing and plays on the bond we all feel with our pets. It's a clever twist that catches the reader off guard. However, while the idea is interesting, it doesn't feel totally new. There are stories out there with similar concepts, so what you need to do is make it stand out more. Maybe give Damage more personality or drop some hints early on that things aren't quite right with him.
The twist definitely changes the whole story, but it happens too quickly. You build up the suspense well, with Damage acting strangely and the character feeling uneasy. But when we finally realize what's going on, it feels like the story wraps up too fast. It would have been better if we had more time to sit with the twist and really feel the shock. Let the reader experience the fear and confusion alongside the main character before rushing to the end.
Overall, you're really close to nailing this! The twist is clever, and the atmosphere is great. You just need to slow down at the end, add a bit more foreshadowing, and dive deeper into the emotions. Keep working on it—you've got something good here!
⊹⊱•••《 FOR THE OTHER PARTICIPANTS 》•••⊰⊹
╰┈➤BERKVILLE༊*·˚
https://www.wattpad.com/story/323783930-berkville
Originality (30 points): 24/30
Impact on Story (25 points): 21/25
Foreshadowing and Build-up (20 points): 10/20
Emotional Response (15 points): 12/15
Total Score: 67/90
╰┈➤THIS IS ME༊*·˚
https://www.wattpad.com/story/364308138-this-is-me
Originality (30 points): 23/30
Impact on Story (25 points): 19/25
Foreshadowing and Build-up (20 points): 14/20
Emotional Response (15 points): 10/15
Total Score: 66/90
╰┈➤REJECTED TO FATE༊*·˚
https://www.wattpad.com/story/357892896-rejected-to-fate
Originality (30 points): 25/30
Impact on Story (25 points): 19/25
Foreshadowing and Build-up (20 points): 10/20
Emotional Response (15 points): 12/15
Total Score: 66/90
╰┈➤THE BOY WHO CAUGHT TIME༊*·˚
https://www.wattpad.com/story/369641415-the-boy-who-caught-time
Originality (30 points): 26/30
Impact on Story (25 points): 16/25
Foreshadowing and Build-up (20 points): 12/20
Emotional Response (15 points): 9/15
Total Score: 63/90
╰┈➤ON THE LAND, IN THE SEA༊*·˚
https://www.wattpad.com/story/371056335-on-the-land-in-the-sea
Originality (30 points): 20/30
Impact on Story (25 points):18/25
Foreshadowing and Build-up (20 points): 12/20
Emotional Response (15 points): 10/15
Total Score: 60/90
╰┈➤ A DAGGER TO MY HEART {MXM}༊*·˚
https://www.wattpad.com/story/352889802-a-dagger-to-my-heart-mxm
Originality (30 points): 27/30
Impact on Story (25 points): 15/25
Foreshadowing and Build-up (20 points): 9/20
Emotional Response (15 points): 8/15
Total Score: 59/90
╰┈➤ECLIPSE༊*·˚
https://www.wattpad.com/story/370809719-eclipse
Originality (30 points): 15/30
Impact on Story (25 points): 17/25
Foreshadowing and Build-up (20 points): 5/20
Emotional Response (15 points): 9/15
Total Score: 46/90
⊹⊱•••《 FINAL WORDS》•••⊰⊹
On behalf of the Golden Petal Awards committee, I want to extend my heartfelt gratitude to all the participants who have made this event a truly magical one. Your talent and dedication have shone brightly, illuminating our hearts and inspiring us all. Congratulations to all the winners!
And many many many thanks to our judge for this category ,FaeHanna_05! <3
Thank you for sharing your gifts with us and for being a shining example of excellence.
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