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The moment we've all been waiting for has finally arrived, dear fairies and magical beings! Welcome to The Golden Petal Awards, where we gather to honor the remarkable achievements of our talented participants.

I am Xtisapi, your host for this wondrous occasion, filled with glittering excitement and boundless joy. It is with great honor that I stand before you all, ready to celebrate the hard work and dedication of our participants.

Each one has displayed extraordinary talent and skill in their chosen categories, and it is a true blessing to be able to recognize their magical contributions.

So let us begin this enchanting celebration and cast a brilliant spotlight on our well-deserving winners!

JUDGE: wenshi_nykx

⭑*•̩̩͙⊱••••DRUM ROLL PLEASE••••̩̩͙⊰•*⭑

FIRST PLACE WINNER FOR 'BEST ACTION SCENE' CATEGORY IS........

╰┈➤CURSED༊*·˚

PLOT: 10/10

WRITING STYLE: 10/10

THEME: 10/10

ORIGINALITY: 10/10

OVERALL ENJOYMENT: 10/10

Total: 50/50

REVIEW:

The plot of the chapter starts to build right from the start. The engaging beginning with our protagonist surviving in a secluded area, with the intense middle part of action and the end part where our protagonist finally enjoys the food after killing the giant man and his companions is beautifully presented.

The writing throughout the chapter is very polished. Every moment of the action is well executed. The description of the scene was concise and vivid which gives a very realistic touch. At the beginning the description of the place, the protagonist's condition in the wild and the growing hunger depicts the struggle. The brief talk with the salamander clearly portrays loneliness. The details of the description of the action scene like the 'axillary and carotid artery', '...right through his Achilles tendon' is very impressive and engaging. 

The theme of the scene is very clear. The protagonist is trying hard to survive in the wild when suddenly some giant people arrive at the resting place and in defense from them, a hustle broke out.

The plot here is very fresh and with your polished writing it becomes very enjoyable and engaging.

The whole chapter portrays a bunch of emotions like loneliness in the beginning, fear in the middle and then a sense of relief towards the end. The way the protagonist finally sits down to enjoy the cooked fish after killing the giant men is quite fresh for the readers. As I said already, the details of the action scene has enhanced the realism of it which is very enjoyable for the readers.

Well done!

SECOND PLACE WINNER FOR 'BEST ACTION SCENE' CATEGORY IS........

╰┈➤HOME FREE: STORIES OF THE PURPLE PEARL PART-2༊*·˚

PLOT: 10/10

WRITING STYLE: 8/10

THEME: 9/10

ORIGINALITY: 10/10

OVERALL ENJOYMENT: 10/10

TOTAL: 47/50

REVIEW:

The plotline of the chapter starts with a good pace and an intense environment before jumping into the action scene. There aren't any grammatical or spelling errors. Also the use of the magical powers of the characters are well written. But I felt that the shift of the scenes in between the chapters could've been more distinguished and organized with a break, instead of '...'

The theme of the scene is intense and beautiful too at the same time. There are magical powers used, weapons used, emotions and the scene shifts in between makes it more interesting.

When it comes to enjoyment, I enjoyed the whole chapter right from the start to the end. At a point, it felt like Tao would survive, but sadly it didn't happen. Such emotional touch makes the whole scene even better.

Well done author!

THIRD PLACE WINNER FOR 'BEST ACTION SCENE' CATEGORY IS........

╰┈➤BAD BOY'S ALPHA ༊*·˚

PLOT: 10/10

WRITING STYLE: 8/10

THEME: 10/10

ORIGINALITY: 8/10

OVERALL ENJOYMENT: 9/10

Total: 45/50

REVIEW:

The werewolf storyline is pretty good. And the involvement of Vampires in it makes it more interesting. The character description of Jax and also Cyrus is brief yet very vivid. There are no grammatical or spelling errors which makes the chapter look even more polished. Although at certain places the paragraphs seemed to break at which I felt it shouldn't. Other than this, everything is pretty good. As a frequent reader of Werewolf books, the plotline was well expected, although due to its good writing the chapter got a freshness in it.

Overall the chapter was very enjoyable. At first I thought it to be a vampire v/s werewolf action, then all of a sudden another pack of werewolves arrived and there was this intense hustle between them. Throughout the chapter, there is an intense environment along with a little comedy from the dialogues. 

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╰┈➤DEMON BRIDE༊*·˚

Total: 43/50

PLOT: 9/10

The plot of the action scene although not very vividly described but pretty good and engaging too.

WRITING STYLE: 7/10

Both the parts seemed to have very short chapters which could have been easily compiled to a single chapter. This wouldn't break the flow of the action scene. Also at certain places better choice of words and sentences could be made to enhance the impact of the chapter, for example, instead of "Ahahaha!" in dialogue, you can just write that the person laughed. This way it looks more elegant and polished.

THEME: 9/10

The Japanese theme of the storyline is very interesting; and the Japanese essence in the action scene too.

ORIGINALITY: 10/10

OVERALL ENJOYMENT: 8/10

As I stated before, the chapters could have been combined together and this would have maintained the flow of the scene too. Apart frome these, the whole scene was very good and enjoyable.

╰┈➤EPINEPHRINE'S RAGE༊*·˚

TOTAL: 42/50

PLOT: 8/10

The plot of the Prologue starts with an intriguing world describing Bulwark and the new alliance body. The cruelty over the King and the civilians. Although the Prologue mainly focuses on the aftermath like the bloody streets, leftover dead bodies and hanging of the king, it can't be considered as an action scene. Coming to Chapter 2 which is completely based on the hustle between Isam's father and the three men. But the whole scene seemed a little out of the flow because of the poor description of the mother and Isam during the fight. In only a single line it was concluded that both of them were too shocked to say anything.

WRITING STYLE: 7/10

Overall the chapter was good and didn't have any major grammatical mistakes except for a few spelling mistakes. The ending seemed to end abruptly with 'the cake left uncut on the dining table, and ten years had passed since then'. There could've been a brief description about the aftermath, like about the fear and relief in their hearts at the same time, and then the flashback could end. Also at certain parts of the action scene better sentence structure could've enhanced the chapter even more. For example 'He went one meter away by rolling' could be 'This powerful impact of the push got his whole torso to be rolled over about a meter'.

THEME: 9/10

The chapter has an engaging theme. Making it in a flashback form makes it more interesting.

ORIGINALITY: 10/10

OVERALL ENJOYMENT: 8/10

As a whole the action scene was well planned and is fresh and engaging too. But due to a few things as I mentioned above like a few spelling mistakes, poor description at certain places and an abrupt ending broke the flow of the plot.

Overall this book has a very good potential, its just that you need to do a thorough editing to mend these small mistakes. 

⊹⊱•••《 FINAL WORDS》•••⊰⊹

On behalf of the Golden Petal Awards committee, I want to extend my heartfelt gratitude to all the participants who have made this event a truly magical one. Your talent and dedication have shone brightly, illuminating our hearts and inspiring us all. Congratulations to all the winners!

And many many many thanks to our judge for this category ,wenshi_nykx! <3

Thank you for sharing your gifts with us and for being a shining example of excellence.

TO THE WINNERS: TO CLAIM YOUR REWARDS PLEASE DO COMMENT DOWN BELOW THE WORD 'CLAIM'

ALSO WINNERS PLEASE DO DOWNLOAD YOUR BADGES FROM HERE:

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