"Foxy, stand back" Nick swings at Cj and Eddy tackles him. He wrestles Eddy off and pins him, punching him in the face repeatedly, Cj Spartan kicks him off. He glanced and sees a handgun fall out of Nick's pants...nick grabs his side and stands up, pulling his fist back and punching helmet less Cj. Cj reels back and stumble 's, he wipes the blood from his mouth and comes back. He knocks Nick down across the face and he falls. Nick punches his in the ribs and Cj cringes, Nick elbows him down and hammers Cj in the face. Eddy stands up and rips Nick off, nick stumbles. Eddy punches him and knocks him down, he turns to help Cj up and Nick stands up, he flicked open a switchblade and slashes at Eddy, it misses Eddy but catches Cj on the arm. Cj rolls and grabs the postal, he crouches and aims, flicking the safety off. Eddy raises his fist and Nick grabs foxy and presses the knife to her throat.

"You move at all, she's getting cut. I'll fucking spill her blood all over this damn place and then kill you two" He walks back to Lola kicks him behind the knees, he let's go of foxy and she runs crying and Eddy grabs her and checked her, Cj stands up and points the gun again, police pull up and Cj lowers the gun, just at he does, nicks lunges up and stabs Lola, he catches her in the abdomen twice and once in the left breast. Police raise their guns and Cj shoots Nick in the shoulder twice, he drops the knife and screams, "you son of a b***! You shot me!"

"You'll live", he throws the gun down and jogs over to Lola, watching Nick carefully. A police officer in the background calls for the ambulance. Eddy is holding Lola's head up and foxy is sobbing. Cj puts pressure on Lola's wounds and she coughs. Blood trickling from her mouth.

"Eddy. Eddy," caresses his face, "if I don't make it...."

"You will." She coughs again

"I'm not sure"

"The wounds are not critical," the police officer said, pushing Cj off and applying pressure on the wounds.

"Lola stay with me," He grips her hand tighter and tears slide off his faces, an ambulance pulls up in the parking lot and Lola's hand goes limp, it falls and Cj pulls Eddy off of her, she is gasping for breath and the paramedics grab her and put her in the ambulance. Eddy and foxy are sobbing.

"She'll make it Eddy. I know it"

...to be continued.....
Do you think she will make it..please comment and I will write more soon..thanks bye