USJ: Fight For All Might
As we took our steps forward we knew there was no turning back.
"why u wan kill all might?"
"Cuz he's a symbol of everything wrong with hero society."
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There's honestly a lot I would change had I the time and energy to rewrite this book:
- have her be the daughter of another hero, not Aizawa. Specifically a low rank hero who isn't all that impressive in the grand scheme of things, but still managed to inspire Zeya
- make Zeya get demoted to being in the hero support course. That would give us a more unique perspective of the school, plus better character development material
- guess I could still leave her as Tomura's childhood friend, but I'd probably workshop their history to not be so melodramatic
- Zeya's relationships with everyone pretty much, especially Bakugo.
As the book is now though, I understand it is an older piece of work and so won't get onto myself too much.
I'm at the very least going to work on wrapping this USJ arc up, since I haven't even touched this book in over a year and need at least SOME closure before I move on from it.
After all is said and done with this arc, I'll probably just post the little timeline I had for this book as a whole. 😅
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I don't think I'm ever gonna finish this book, chat. 🤣
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