Frosty medows

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Mother and daughter pulled on their coats before they walked out the door. The streets were crusted in frost and a few gentle snowflakes drifted softly to the ground.
"Icy grass!" Tina yelled buoyantly as she rushed to the nearest plant. Her mother giggled at the fascination on her daughters face as she closely examined the blade of grass. A bright twinkle of joy and hopefulness emerged in the young girl's eyes when a small snow flake landed on the tip of her nose. Her green eyes widened as she looked up at the sky just when the snow fall got a lot heavier. She giggled gleefully as she got covered in white snow, she shook it of like a dog and ran to her mum.
"It's snowing mummy!" Tina exclaimed.
"I can see that Tinny, do want to go to the the park or stay here and play in the snow?" Her mother answered. Tina thought for a bit. She must have found this question very perplexing.
"Is there snow at the park." She asked.
"Of course my honey bunch."
"Den lets go to the park." Tina said irrevocably before grabbing her mothers hands.

They walked along the cold footpath towards the park, Tina's mother glanced at the fields blanketed in snow, and the foggy, snow filled sky. The snow fell from the clouds like petals from a flower. They covered an ordinary street with snow, turning it into a winter wonderland, every now and again Tina would stop and stare at the snow before her Mother hurried her along. It reminded her of when she met her dad. She was walking along next to a frozen pond and he bumped into her. She remembered the man he used to be, kind, generous, mature. That was the man she fell in love with, that isn't the man he is now. She starred again at the snow covered meadows, she saw a family, having a picnic , a whole family, with a little girl, a father and a mother. She wished she was still apart of that family, instead of apart of this broken one.

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