SHORT STORY RESULTS (Corrected) 🏅
Sorry but I'm not very happy about this situation. So, Here's a little advice for the judges. Be more responsible. I have given you all the powers to skip any entry that doesn't go according to Wattpad Guidelines as well the Rules of the Awards. Also, l have given you the chance of doing a mutual swap with your other judge in case you have already read one of the entries and don't feel like going through it yet again. As the host, I am not intermediating here cause I have to deal with 125 participants, and 25 judges separately. So be very careful and very responsible cause your mistakes might be a demotivation to a fetus writer.
Nonetheless, thank you judges tchairband1 and Cha0ticallyV3ngeful for co-operating and not just ghosting your host.
Thank you very much to everyone who participated in this category plus the one who had to step down from the winner's list. Remember whether you win or not your amazing journey continues.
Out of all the 10 entries we have chosen 3 winning entries; Winner, Runners up and Merit.
Let me announce the good names. Once again!
🥉MERIT: Here we have two winning entries.
Algor Mortis by Katopark
Score sheet :
Blurb: 10/10
Book cover/Title: 6/10
Plot development: 17/20
Character development: 18/20
Grammar and punctuation: 5/5
Overall enjoyment: 15/15
Total: 70/80
Review:
First I don't like crime or mystery stories because I find them boring but this one was AMAZING! The dark theme and the thrilling events made it such a beauty! good job honestly deserves to win.
The only thing that wasn't good enough is the cover, the character has a disproportionate body so as a tip for the writer I know that you can choose a better one.
Happy for you! Yayyy
Whispering Springs, New Mexico by LeaSheryn
Score sheet :
Book cover and title: 8/10
Blurb: 6/10
Plot development: 19/20 Character development: 19/20
Grammar and punctuation: 5/5
Overall enjoyment: 13/15
Total score: 70/80
Review :
The plot moves perfectly from each chapter to the next. All the characters act so realistically and feel like actual people! The blurb has the characters and sort of the conflict, but not the very important stakes. However, it is an interesting blurb. even if it is one sentence.
🥈RUNNERS UP: Echo in the Wind by strawberry1d
Score sheet :
Book cover and title: 9/10
Blurb: 7/10
Plot development: 19/20 Character development: 19/20
Grammar and punctuation: 3/5 Overall enjoyment: 15/15
Total score: 74/80
Review :
The blurb is a bit wordy and hard to read. suggest splitting it into more than one sentence. The introduction was very hooking! There are a lot of typos and punctuation errors. The plot moved forward very smoothly. was hooked from beginning to end! My only main suggestion is to look over your grammar and punctuation.
🥇WINNER: Obelisk: Vision of the Host by SolusWriting
Score sheet:
Book cover and title: 9/10
Blurb: 8/10
Plot development: 20/20
Character development: 19/20
Grammar and punctuation: 5/5
Overall enjoyment: 15/15
Total score: 76/80
Review:
Make sure you remember to put your name on your book cover. The plot flows smoothly the whole way. Was hooked from beginning to end. I recommend a stronger introduction. You jump straight into world-building which can be disorienting. Other than that great job!
Congratulations Winners !!!🎉🎉
Note: All the above stickers are samples only. Winners will receive links to their inbox with further guidance.
All the participants who wish to have a copy of their score sheets please contact your respective judge.
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