OS -

1) The Masked Princess by shristi258

Title - 5/5

The title is pretty unique.

Cover + Blurb - 7/10

The cover is pretty intriguing and mysterious, absolutely apt for the story. However, the blurb could have been elaborate.

Originality + Creativity - 8/10

The story is pretty original and creativity was also showing up.

Character Development - 9/20

The character development didn't draw any attention, as it was a but boring.

Grammar - 7/20

There were many punctuation problems and error in tenses.

Interaction with Reader's - 10/10

Interaction was proper.

Draw - 2/5

It didn't got my whole attention though.

Overall - 17/20

Could be a good read but there were were errors too.

Total - 65/100

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SS -

1) HUMARI ADHURI KAHANI by Ssdevan

Title - 2/5

Less originality.

Cover + Blurb - 4/10

The edit looks too tacky far the title and book. There is no such specific blurb to drag reader's attention.

Originality + Creativity - 7/10

The writer has a good potential to create something interesting but the plot is too common.

Character Development - 7/20

There isn't any character development as such, moreover the story's each phase was too rapid to notice the development.

Grammar - 10/20

There are no proper punctuations, tenses are wrong and no expressions.

Interaction with Reader's - 2/10

No such interactions.

Draw - 2/5

Didn't really got attracted towards the story.

Overall - 11/20

Not good to be very honest.

Total - 47/100

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LS (FF) -

1) The Cruel Reality by sparkles_snuffles

Title - 4/5

The title seemed pretty intriguing.

Cover + Blurb - 8/10

The blurb is pretty interesting but the cover could have a better view.

Originality + Creativity - 6/10

Though the plot seemed a bit common still it had creativity somewhere.

Character Development - 15/20

The character development grabbed an ample amount of interest.

Grammar - 18/20

The spellings were correct but no expressions.

Interaction with Reader's - 2/10

No proper interaction.

Draw - 5/5

It kept me hooked to the story.

Overall - 19/20

It was a good read and impressive.

Total - 77/100

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Series -

1) KUCH TOH HAI TERE MERE DARMIYAAN (1 & 2) by Ssdevan

Title:- 5/5 

The title seemed pretty interesting and apt. for the story. 

Cover/Blurb :- 6.5/10

The cover was too timid with pictures,which made it look too tacky. There is nothing specific in the blurb, in both the books, just only in book 2 to inform that it's a sequel. 

Originality/ Creativity:- 8.6/10

The plot seems original and the starting was able to grab my attention. The writer has a good potential.

Character Development:- 14/20 

It seemed to me, that the characters were developed forcefully, no expressions to understand at all. But this was changed in the second book, whi h is a great step, with making the characters develop properly, without any rush or error.

Grammar:- 5/20 

It has fault in tenses, punctuations and the usage of Hindi words in the author's POV which could have been translated in English easily. Ex:- Grihaprawesh ( Translation:- homecoming) 

Interaction with Reader's :- 4/10 

The interaction is less but in the second book, there is NO SUCH INTERACTIONS.

DRAW:- 3/5 

Was interesting to an extent. 

Overall :- 12.5/20 

The first book could be made better, as the second book was pretty better than the first season. More interesting with comparatively less faults and errors. A better read than S1.

Total:- 58.6/100