LS (FF) -

1) MAI TERA by AniditaBarristerBabu

TITLE:- 3/5 

reason:- No creativity as such, too simple and common. 

COVER/ BLURB:- 4/10

reason:- No specific blurb to arouse the interest within the readers. 

ORIGINALITY:- 4.5/10 

reason:- While going through the fiction, for a second I felt like as if I am watching the same story as of the show. 

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT:- 7/20 

reason:- found no such Character Development which can grab readers attention. 

GRAMMAR:- 5.5/20 

reason:- Sometimes the descriptions of the general author's pov were in english or sometimes in hindi, No punctuations, No expressions to convey the emotions of a particular character. Last but not the least, Wrong spellings. 

INTERACTION WITH READERS:- 2.5/10

reason:- Less Interaction, not at all reply on comments or any such actions were taken by the author. 

DRAWN:- 1/5

reason:- Felt less interested. 

OVERALL IMPRESSION :- 5/20 

reason:- for the author's hardwork. 

TOTAL- 32/100

2) SANAM TERI KASAM by AniditaBarristerBabu

TITLE:- 2.5/5 

reason: Pretty Common. 

COVER/ BLURB: 5/10 

reason: No specific blurb. However the sentence, " Journey from Hatred to Love" ignited my excitement. 

ORIGINALITY: 4/10 

reason: Concept is common. 

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT:- 12/20 

reason:- Nice Character Development but somewhere Aniruddh's or the male protagonist's character is too blur to be understand. 

GRAMMAR:- 5/20 

reason :- No such usage of english grammar and even if it was there then also wrong. 

INTERACTION WITH THE READER:- 5/10

reason:- Better than previous response. 

DRAWN:- 4/5 

reason:- Was a bit inclined. 

OVERALL:- 7/20

reason:- A Nice story and there is a lot of potential within the writer. 

Total:-    41.5/100 or 42/100