☣ Pranbir ☣ (Reviews)
TS -
1) My heart and soul for you! by PallaviEswarkumar03
Title : 4/5
Cover + blurb : 2.8/10
Originality + Creativity : 10/10
Character development : 18/20
Grammar 14.3/20
Interaction with Readers : 10/10
Draw : 4.2/5
Overall impression : 15.3/20
Total : 78.6/100
Review : It's a nice and different title. The author has tried very hard to work out the cover, so just gave points for that, but it has not turned out good, plus it's very messy work and there is nothing in the name of blurb. It takes a bit of time to draw in a reader, since the blurb is not provided, but later on it takes speed, which to me it seems the author is in a very hurry to finish the story. Plot is very much original and creative too, it's a plus point. Adding too much space after a sentence is over to put a full stop or comma, puts a reader off. It didn't let me enjoy it fully.
OS -
1) Harbingers : Clutches of Time by Sara_imprfctScribblr
Title : 5/5
Cover + blurb : 5/10
Originality + Creativity : 10/10
Character development : 19.4/20
Grammar 16.7/20
Interaction with Readers : 8.8/10
Draw : 5/5
Overall impression : 16.9/20
Total : 86.8/100
Review : The title is really impressive and unique one, but there is no cover. A very interesting blurb is provided that makes you intrigued to check it out, and the development of the character's is been shown perfectly, but sometimes the feelings of them are not coming out properly for us to feel for them. Sentence formation and punctuation is a huge problem here and i am sure the author will change it, and I feel the author should interact with her readers more.
LS (FF) -
1) Destined To Be by NandiniGhosh
Title : 4/5
Cover + blurb : 9.5/10
Originality + Creativity : 9.7/10
Character development : 14/20
Grammar 20/20
Interaction with Readers : 7/10
Draw : 5/5
Overall impression : 18.4/20
Total : 87.6/100
Review : The title is nice and suiting the story too but i wished it was something unique, a different one. A lovely cover perfect for the story and how it's related with the show, but the author gas moulded it in her own unique way but a bit more creativity is needed in the story. Minus point is in character development, which is not shown properly, we don't feel for them, as their feelings are underdeveloped. The author needs to interact with her reader's more. It's a wonderful story nonetheless.
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