OS -

1) Love in Festival by JagyasheniRoy

Title :- 4/5 

Nice title. Potrait the Story well. But It can be a little unique. As it is common name. 

Blurb + Cover :- 8/10 

Cover is Nice. But I think you can Add a little bit more in blurb. So it will Catch the Attention. 

Originality + Creativity :- 5/10

The story line is not that much unique. And sadly but I think you can write alot about Durga Pooja. As you mentioned that you are from Kolkata. So their is a lot thing you can write about this. Or maybe This story can be a little bit different. But it was Not Unique or Creative. 

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT :- 17/20

About One shot. The Character different is Purely from how you Potrait the Character. And I think their is a little bit more work can happen in the Feelings of them. So we can understand the Character Sketch. 

Grammar :- 16/20

You have to work on a little bit of sentence formation. And rest their is not too big Mistakes in grammar. 

Interaction with reader :- 9/10

Yes she used to reply everyone comments. And the interaction is good. 

Draw :- 3/5

Yes the story is good. But if I tell about my prospection it not like too Much attached. Maybe because of lack of Sentence formation. It didn't made a perfect Print of this Story in me. 

Overall Enjoyment :- 16/20

Overall Enjoyment is good. About Reading to the end so it a one shot story. Didn't drag anything. A simple yet cute story. 

Total :- 78/100 

TS -

1) Kumkum Bhagya - A Story of Love & Revenge by JagyasheniRoy

Title:- 3/5 

Yes, the title is correspond with the story. But still it too long and common title. You can made it short. And pls write title in normal font. Because in different font, the title doesn't look attention seeking.

Blurb + Cover :- 5/10

Blurb is nothing to catch anyone attention. I really think, the author should write more thing to catch attention. And about cover, there is do many things written and pics are not clear,  I still feel cover can be replaced with less words and simple pics with elegant background that seeks people's attention.

Originality + Creativity :- 6/10

Yes, the story is creative. But still it's not that much original. I really think I read a lot story like this. So I can't give marks on originality.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT:- 14/20

Yes the characters are unique in their own way. As it is fanfic, some characters are same from the show. But I think you need to work on the feelings of the characters. Keep effort on the feeling of characters. This is the only reason I deduct 6 marks because you didn't put effort on expressing their emotions. But how you describe about your character and your dialogue, I like it.  

Grammar:- 15/20

Grammar is good. And there is not that much problem in punctuation. But still you can change your writing style. The writing style is not like stories.

Interaction with reader :- 9/10  

I really think interaction with people is nice.

Draw :- 3/5

Yes the story flow and draw is nice.

Overall Enjoyment :- 9/20

There is lot of reason for deduction of marks. The author didn't put effort on expressing feelings. That stop me to connect with the story. And then the writing style. In starting the font of title that really looked weird (not attractive) and then short and not actually having any importance in the blurb and the blurry cover.

Total :- 61/100 

SS -

1) ABHIGYA'S LIFE by JagyasheniRoy

Title :- 4/5

Title is relevant to the story.

Blurb + Cover :- 8/10

Blurb didn't kept more and it is a one shot collections. But the author told about the story in starting. The cover is also nice.

Originality + Creativity :- 6/10

The work is original. But still it lack of creativity. There is same drama, jealousy, someone else love like very common plot.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT :- 14/20 

As it is a one shot collections their is no character development work. Still how you explain characters I give marks according to that. I think you should tell more about character thoughts and behaviour.

Grammar :- 13/20

Uses of punctuation correctly and some words you use change the gender of male protagonist. And some are meaningless. So you have to work on choosing words here.

Interaction with reader :- 7/10 

I think you can interact with them better as of now.

Draw :- 4/5

Draw is nice. As it is a one shots still I think you can use some different and unique topic so it can catch more attention.

Overall Enjoyment :- 16/20

Nice story i enjoyed it. Just take care of words that you are using.

Total:- 72/100 

LS (FF) -

1) Khatti Meethi by ragika1

Title :- 4/5

The title is perfect and really lovely. But Abhigya version unedited. I think you can mention it in blurb rather than in title. It make it look more messy.

Blurb + Cover :- 8/10 

Cover is Nice. But I think you can Add a little bit more in blurb.

Originality + Creativity :- 8/10

This is not kinda pure original but i really liked your creativity. Your mom- daughter duo talk is actually amazing. I really laugh at their antics.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT :- 19/20 

I really liked how you put efforts to change their thoughts. You really explain them very nicely I like it.  

Grammar :- 18/20

The grammar is nice still sometime their is mistakes in sentence formation and punctuation. But it is too major.  

Interaction with reader :- 5/10

I really think here you have to put efforts i know you reply most of them but interaction is not too good.

Draw :- 5/5

Draw is actually amazing I love to read that story and will surely read in free time.

Overall Enjoyment :- 18/20

I really enjoyed the story. But still take care of sentence formation. And really amazing to read this. And I will surely completely this story in free time.

Total:- 85/100 

2) Saaya (Shadow) by Jasminearun

Title :- 3/5

The title is nice. But still I think it is not relevant to the story.

Blurb + Cover :- 7/10 

Blurb can ve little more. Blurb mein kuch khas nahi hai. And cover is not really eye catching.

Originality + Creativity :- 8/10

The story line is not that much original as I really see this kind of story very much but still the creativity is amazing. How you tell about everyone is amazing.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT :- 8/20

Well characters ka toh acchar baba diya aapne. I mean samaj mein hi nahi aaraha kon sahi kon galat. But you express their thoughts amazingly. 

Grammar :- 10/20

Grammar is nice. But please take care of writing style. You messed up all the dialogue it too hard to understand what is said by whom. So pls take a look on it immediately.

Interaction with reader :- 6/10 

I think you have to interact them more nicely.

Draw :- 3/5

Draw is nice but still somewhere too much confusion in characters and their dialogues didn't let the people to connect.

Overall Enjoyment :- 13/20

Hey your writing and dialogue messed up that's why I can't enjoyed the story completely.

Total :- 58/100