Rewrite
HEY! I have not forgotten this. I've just noticed I really rushed this, and I had a lot of flaws such as:
I put a smut scene where there didn't need to be one;
I rushed the romance and while Halo would be likely to already love Troy because he's already felt this way for a while when the story starts, Troy is just discovering his feelings for Halo and even his own sexuality;
Halo is a bit overreactive and tends to be quick to think irrationally;
I'm a bit indecisive with Halo's personality- I need to make him either stubborn and hardheaded with a soft side or just plain soft;
I didn't give enough time for Troy and Halo to even get to know each other.
I'm sure there's more but that's what I'm focusing on. Not to mention I need to figure out what Cyran's deal is and what I want to do with him and I didn't consider the financial situations I gave both Halo and Troy. I might also change Charlie's name for my own personal reasons.
I won't be deleting the chapters I have up! However, I will be rewriting the story from this point on. The intro will probably stay the same, but I think I'll add an intro from Troy's perspective, too. I don't want to delete what's there because I don't want to end up screwing this up the way I screwed up Opposites Attract.
Expect slow updates, but if I take too long please please please don't be afraid to give me a kick in the ass about it! (Ie if I take more than 2 weeks).
I love you my dudes!!!!! STAY SAFE!
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