So far, The Deeplands has only been read once in each part.  It would mean a lot if someone would comment what they enjoy about the book, or why they started reading, as well as any suggestions.  I will give full credit to anyone who gives me a valid suggestion I use.

Thanks!

Question:  Is the first person point of view giving a good explanation of everything that is going on?  Should I move it to current first person rather than the notebook?  Should I have the points of view of more than one character?