Participant in the 2019 Chaos Awards 7 organized by CreativeChaos and judged by me under the genre Sci Fic.

Book- Project: Sub-Terra
Genre: Science Fiction/Adventure/Mystery/Fantasy
Mature: No
LGBTQ: No

Author: Creative_Dragon

Book Title

The book title is perfect for the plot. Being short it's also catchy.

Book Cover

The cover consists of some mysterious setup. Again, making it a good choice. The colors chosen are maroon and navy blue with white texts on them. I feel the author's name could be made bigger on the cover.

Book Description

The book description gives me enough information to hit the read button but there's one suggestion that I'd like to give regarding its presentation: it needs spacing so that the contents are clearer to the readers.

Plot

The book starts with the discovery of a high tech design of a device that in turn discovers some mysterious tunnels. Why are the tunnels said to be mysterious? Well, what do you call things which haven't got any record of manmade or nature-made evidences? This is when the author introduces more enjoyment with a team of six volunteers each having different personalities set out for a nerve wracking exploration.

Spelling, Punctuation, Grammar and Vocabs

While the spellings and grammar seem alright, I'd suggest the author to take care with their punctuation. The vocabulary used is simple for the ordinary people to understand.

Writing Style, Character Development, Flow and Setting

I'll stay honest and write what I felt. At times, the writing seemed confusing to me because I couldn't keep track of the flow. However, I must say that the author's writing style is appreciated in chapter six where they greatly described the physical appearance of Colonel Nick Malwitz. The character development only did the job for Travis and Utima; there is scope for bringing more improvements to other characters. I'd also like a little bit more effort in the setting.

Creativity and Enjoyment

One thing was for sure: the idea of crafting an individual chapter for each of the people volunteering for the exploration was really great. In addition to this, chapter six revealed some outstanding things as said that the "walls move." This was definitely a major element added to the story, making me sticking to it for future revelations. The more I read, the more understood that further interesting stuffs await the readers.

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