(Ok guys so my writing style is changed now but I'm going to look back at my old stories and see if there's anything i need to change)

(Your pov)

You walk through the door with Chara following, shivering as you enter the new snowy biome. You start regretting only having a sweater and wished you had a jacket to cover up in. As ypu walked, you say a big branch in your way. For no reason in particualr you try to pick it up, woth no luck in picking it up, and one snarky response from Chara, you continued on. As you walked, a loud snapping sound rung out through the air. You quickly turned around and all color drained your face as the vranch was snapped in half. You turn around again and continued walking, more cautious than before. You saw something move out of the corner of your eye and stopped to look around, only to find nothing again. You were quiet. "H-hello?" You called out. There was no response. You took in a deep breath and continued. You saw the end of a bridge. It had bars across it that were oddly wide , but luckly you were able to pass through. Suddenly, you heard domething move, making you tense up. "MOVE!!!" Chara yelled at you. But you were too afraid. You felt your legs were frozen still. Soon the moving stopped, and when you were about to sigh out, a deep voice peirced through. "H u m a n. D o n 't  y o u  k n o w   h o w  t o  g r e e t  a  n e w  p a l." He started. Suddenly you blacked out. But this time, you were able too see everything. Your body turning around. Your interaction with the misterious person. You were able to examibe him. He was a skeleton. He wore a blue jacket woth white fluff around the hood, and a white shirt under it, basket ball shirts on and wore white socks and pink slippers. He was interesting looking to say the least. You weren't able to hear everything, but heard his name. Sans...Oh! Like Comic Sans! You smile to yourself and saw a white flash, and suddenly you were back. "Anyways go through this gate thingy. Yeah go roght through. My bro made the bars too wide to stop anyone. You giggle a bit at this. You walk through, Sans following after. "Quick. Behind that convineintly shaped lamp." He told you. "Stay." Chara told you in reponse. You trusted Chara the most so you stayed. "Uhh ok I guess you don't have to." Sans said a bit confused like. You kind if regretted it. Sans' brother soon arrived, who Chara called Papyrus. He quickly jetted off after talking to sans a bit. You looked at Sans before heading to the path Papyrus went down. "Hey hate to bother you, but can you do me a favor?" Sans started. You turned to Sans and nodded. "My bro would reallt like to see a human. So it'd be good if.. you know...kept pretending to be one." He said then left. You looked at yourswlf...you were a human. You shrugged it off and continued down the path. You saw a shinung star and reached out to it. Red text appeared in front of you saying '20 left". You felt yourself smile. You don't know why.

(Sorry it's so short. Im not allowed on here so im just writing this quickly)