Teen Fiction Winners!
Hello lovelies! I'm here to announce the lovely winners of the Teen Fiction genre! This genre has been judged by the wonderful: R_Dreamer Be sure to thank them for all their hard work!! I personally would like to thank you for helping out with this contest, and I'm sure all participants are thankful to you as well! Shall we reveal your chosen winners? <3
Please Remember! If you want your winner sticker you will need to send me a Private Message on my main account: coolcourtney5 I'll need to know which place and genre you have won.
Now then, On to the winners!!
Let's start things off with our Third Place Winner!:
Logan & Elizabeth by: brunette-bombshell
Review: The title says it all, the story is about these two teens. The cover represents the two together and their time spent. The summary of the book is straight forward gives us background on both characters and the start of what's to come.
I was sucked into the scene you had written. It was full of vivid imagery. I personally felt like I was there watching the story unfold.At first, I was wondering why you skipped to five months later, but now I know you did this because you wanted us to get a glimpse of her life before the move. I enjoyed that in some places you used dialogue to explain some background that was needed to be known.One thing I suggest, in chapter four there's a point of view change where it switches from Logan to Elizabeth, it's not subtle and I think it may work best as just putting it as next chapter.The only thing I hope for is to see more of Elizabeth as the story progresses. Her settings have changed and she's trying to adjust. I was surprised at how quick she made friends, but that could just be her personality.
Congratulations Lovely! <3
Coming in at Second Place we have!!:
Popular by: toasterwaffles20
Review: The title matches well with the story. The cover is cute, very pink, but I think it represents the story well. The summary of the book could use a little work. I mean it explains the story well, but it could be explained better especially since the book is completed.
Honestly, I enjoyed this story from the moment I first started reading it. The narration and point of view are from the main character, Kendra herself so it's easy to get caught up in her world. A few things I noticed though and thought might make the story better. So if you plan on rewriting and editing think about this:Kendra is a popular girl who does not want to be popular. She has a fear of being tormented. I think that you can use that to expand the introduction of her more. I only a few chapters so maybe you did play on this important information to have her go back and forth if you did, that's wonderful, if not just think about it.Another thing was that there were times where you have someone talking and then Kendra's reaction to it. If you put the reaction in a different line rather than right after the speaker it's much more clear that she is not the one speaking.Those are my suggestions. I think it's a wonderful story and an interesting play on the popular girl in school.
Congratulations Lovely!! <3 <3
Annd Finally! For Our First Place Winner!!!:
Mirror Me By: Jules_Haigler
Review: I don't understand why the story is called Mirror Me, but I'm certain that somewhere in the story this is explained. The cover is wonderful it goes well with the title and the summary. There is a land beyond the mirrors and that's clear in the cover. The summary itself tells us everything that we need to know.
The first sentence really captivated me. It may be because I can understand that look. Continuing reading you brought me into this family with strict rules and left me reading chapter after chapter to find out the mystery behind this bazaar rule of having no mirrors.It's not a story you read every day. There is a clear influence of Hispanic culture and that's what caught my attention about this story. There's a lot of bullying that comes from Hope being different, being Hispanic. Being different n the society she is in gives us a grasp of how Hope is as a character because we get to see that she has pent up anger, she's insecure, and more importantly an oddball. I don't really have suggestions because the grammar and details were on point. The character hadn't changed from when I started reading, but it's clear that there will be character development within the story as one continues to read it. The only thing I thought could use a little work was Marcus. He has a little moment in the story and before that, we never heard of him or was introduced. I just think it's a little sudden and short, so maybe elaborate on him some more... if it helps with the growth of the story.
Congratulations Lovely!!! <3 <3 <3
I hope you've all enjoyed participating in this contest! Please be sure to thank your judge and congratulate your winners!! If you haven't won please don't be upset, there will be many more contests to come, I promise!
Thanks again! <3
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