Short Story Winners!
Hello everyone! It's time for the winners of the Short Story genre to be announced. I would like to give a huge thank you to GoldenPen_ for judging in this contest. You have helped out in practically every contest I've hosted, and for that I thank you. <3
Please Remember!! If you want your winner sticker you'll need to private message my main account: coolcourtney5
Honourable Mentions:
Fate: The Choice That Led to Tragedy by: booklover311921
Score: 88/100
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Mistletoe and Eggnog by: stressed-to-impress
Score: 88.5/100
Congratulations lovelies!
Taking Third Place we have!:
Coco' s Random Free Writes by: CocoS_14
Score: 90.5/100
Review: I enjoyed how this was not just one story, but a collection of short story plotlines. Each one was able to stand alone, and I was drawn in by most of them.
My only sugggestion would be to maybe add a little to each one. They don't necessarily need to be transformed into novel length or anything, but adding more depth to some of these pieces could definitely make them more impactful.
Congratulations Lovely! <3
Coming in at Second Place we have!!:
Heartless by: Umeike
Score: 92/100
Review: This was a very emotional story to read. The way you've written it, it is easy for us to sympathize with the main character, and to become invested in what will happen to him.
You lost a few points for grammar, but a thorough edit could really improve that issue.
Congratulations Lovely!! <3 <3
Annnd Finally!!! For Our First Place Winner!!!:
Fallen Angel by: HayBay-
Score: 95/100
Review: The flow of your story works nicely, and you do a good job of incorporating the flashback into the plot. You also do a fairly good job with descriptions, though I would like to see a little more of the main character's emotions. Instead of merely telling, show us a bit more of how she reacted to the devastating news.
Aside from that, this was a quick and enjoyable read.
Congratulations Lovely!!! <3 <3 <3
I would like to thank you all for entering this contest! I hope you have enjoyed it so far, and I hope you all return for the next Chaos Awards! Please remember to thank your judge for all their hard work, and to congratulate your winners!! Please don't be upset if you haven't won, there will be many more chances to come! I can promise you that much!
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