Romance winners
Congrats on romance Winners and thank you to the judge as well! I appreciate it so much for your time and effort for this awards!!
And if you like your score please let me know how I can give it to you thank you
1st place is
Ancilla by SeraDrake
Cover: 3.5/5
Eye-catching! Even if it doesn't exactly convey romance except for the suggestive caption, it definitely gives a mysterious and fantasy vibe. I can see the magic symbols in the back, and something that looks like a library or books, but I'm not sure what it actually is. Also, perhaps you can make the caption slightly bigger, and a more elegant font that matches the raunchiness of the words. Still, the colour theme is fantastic!
Title: 9.5/10
Original for sure, and has an intriguing ring to it.
Blurb: 9/10
Interesting! I'm not sure if you need any commas in the sentence that goes, "A shy public reference librarian, and a college..." Your blurb is very explanatory and gives an insight into the characters already, which is cool. Overall, it can definitely hook readers!
Character Development: 13/15
The experiences of the main character are written with so much detail.
Plot: 14/15
A very, very unique book. The experiences of the mc is the main focus, and the way it's written showcases her layered experiences that make up the person she is.
Overall Enjoyment: 23.5/25
Definitely would read it again, such a unique read.
Total: 72.5/80
2 place is
Querencia by @Ashaisaa
Cover: 3.5/5
Cute cover! The picture is clear and conveys the theme. The title is placed perfectly and the font suits it well, too. The caption is alluring but one thing I might change is the font of it, or maybe italicize it? Otherwise, it is an eye-catching and cute cover.
Title: 9.5/10
Very unique! Also, it has a nice ring to it.
Blurb: 9/10
Very unique, and very interesting. The way you've described the effect on his senses is quite poetic. Nice! There are grammar mistakes.
Character Development: 13/15
The prologue (which is absolutely beautiful!!) kind of sets the tone for a whole 'soulmates' theme, so their first few interactions aren't too strange in the whole 'they just met' sense, because, you know, soulmates. Still, the events are nicely paced and wholesome. Also, the two boys have very different personalities. The inner monologue really helps to understand what he is thinking and feeling, which is a great bonus. Nice!
Plot: 13/15
Quite fast paced because everything happens almost immediately, but that makes sense considering the short length of the story. Still, the writing is very descriptive and paces the story well. Also, it's a very sweet, dream-like story. Neat!
Overall Enjoyment: 23/25
The writing is amazing, would read it again even only for your beautiful descriptions.
Total: 71/80
3rd place is
Rise to Stardom by HappyEndingWriter
Cover: 4.5/5
Absolutely amazing cover! The position of the title really pops, and the overall cover definitely suits the theme. The only thing is that the picture is kind of low light, so I didn't even realize that the girl was facing forward. After I realized that she was facing the front is when the title really popped like I'd mentioned. Overall, it's a really effective cover. Nice!
Title: 8/10
Quite an interesting title. 'Rise To Stardom' sounds almost like a biography, but it has an interesting ring to it.
Blurb: 8/10
Definitely fits the theme of the book. It's quite interesting, though maybe you could break the first paragraph up a bit to make it easier to read. Also, there were grammar mistakes in terms of you switching between past and present tense.
Character Development: 14/15
The interactions between the characters are written very nicely. Love the dynamics that you've brought between them.
Plot: 13.5/15
Nice pace that lets the readers feel. It's definitely not a cliche story, and the descriptions are very smooth between transitions. Nice!
Overall Enjoyment: 23.5/25
It's a great, emotional vibe that you've created. Definitely a book to go back to!
Total: 71.5/80
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